Very cringy

Interesting restart and good luck!

Well it kinda does need rewriting cause it is kinda cringey... I only read this cause it's the only thing I could find on a ruby Starcraft gamer crossover

It would be cool to rewrite the story, just hope you can keep writing this, because their aren't that many stories like this one.

...i'll give it two more chapters thats it then decide...and plz dont delete this one i happen to like rereading it

I think i would prefer a continuation rather then a rewrite but that's up to you.

I think the main thing i would like to see would be to keep the OC's to a minimum, as in just Silver and a single AI he gives orders too. I think its far more interesting to have him interact with rwby characters instead of other OC's. Rwby has enough characters and plot so you really don't need to bring in much else.

Also i think the Silver should establish himself as a new nation/faction early on rather then going 50k words in before he bothers bringing his large ships down to the surface of remnant.

Nice that this is back, as for the revrite idea. Yeah it could work, but if you plan to send him to more worlds later than remember he needs some kind of plan, and steady power growth. Because the last time the story and overall plan was little chaotic. Besides that I will wait with opinion till some more chapters happend, good luck.

Tbh I would rather see a continuation of what the seres already is rather than starting from scratch

is it just me or are the chappies getting progressively shorter?

Character interaction is cringy, MC's planning is terrible, and the author introduces more 'Players characters' in chapter 5. If your fine with that then give it a read, but it was just too much for me.

Cringy...

when will you update

Why call it a “City-Mothership”? At least for Protoss, motherships are literally cities refitted for military capability.

i love this and would like to read how this goes into the future

Definitely an interesting scene and chapter!