I started this fic for the angst ride and I am so satisfied with the way you wrote this. I loved how you treated the claustrophobia with the attention it deserves and how we got to glimpse into the character's feelings. Thank you for writing this! XD

this was great. i enjoyed how you characterized lance with claustrophobia and how shiro tries to calm him down and make sure that everything's okay. nicely done.

this is very well written and precious and aaaah i really like itttt

As lovely as always!
I definitely love the addition with the cookie talk and Lance trying so, so hard to keep talking but just going off with "I can't breathe" there at the end. Poor baby. Hunk and Shiro's worry is palatable once they get eyes on him (and seriously, Lance staring blankly ahead is a terrifying image) and I'm so proud of the team for how quickly they responded and helped out.
And of course, Shiro. I do love how you make him this big protector who at the same time feels immensely guilty (especially for such a "useless" mission but I do think it is good to be thorough :p). I''m glad Allura didn't force the issue of the pods. Definitely something that Lance is going to have to address (although if he is suffering such a fatal wound that he's unconscious getting him into a pod wouldn't be much of an issue since he'd wouldn't be awake). I'm hoping maybe Pidge and Hunk can make a larger version of one, somehow.
It was a pleasure to beta your lovely writing. Thank you for sharing this wonderful langst with us all!