Cute variation. Thank you

Interesting story! I would recommend having a go at reading it. For once, Mr Collins is an attractive man, though still very idiotic. Wickham is more subdued in tarnishing Darcy, meaning he is playing the perfect gentleman much longer. These two things do quite change the outcome of the story.
Thank you

Disappointing ending! The story is left hanging! It won't allow me to give a rating that a good ending would make possible.

First of all: thank you so much to share your work with us. It’s a great history and a have a so big expectations about the next chapters that was difficult for me to stop and make this review.
I can follow and have so much emotions about the last chapters. It’s wonderful when you can care about the characters even if you want to stop then and just put some sense in them: Good! What the hell this Elizabeth is thinking? She can think?
Sorry for the words. Believe me it’s not a way to diminish your work, on the contrary: he's so good that he's turned Elizabeth into a character I love to hate.
I can like her less than other obnoxious characters like Caroline and Lady Catarine. Since I generally like the character (Elizabeth) very much, I hope she gets redemption in the end, ending the story as a teenager without the slightest self-control, proud and spiteful does not seem the best way.
Thank you again ...

I enjoyed this story very much

I read this in one sitting and honestly I love it! The slow burn was so good.

Darcy sent the newlyweds to visit Mr and Mrs Bennet, not Mr and Mrs Darcy.

That was fascinating! I loved all the mix up. Kitty marrying first, and to Collins! And he being a different sort of person. Wickham pursuing Lizzy as he did. It was really interesting! Thx for sharing!

Love it! I couldn't stop reading, and would have gladly kept on had there been more.

Thank you!

Not much different from the classic except for dialog and a change from Charlotte to Kitty.

Thanks for sharing your lovely P&P variation. I enjoyed it very much.

What a lovely story! Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!

Very nice story.

is this fic finished ?/