Needs editing.
Your tenses are all over the place.
The backstory was hamfisted.
I'm not going to continue reading this.

The story seems good so far but I really hope you don’t change all this stuff just for it to end the same as cannon. I mean Kisame should’ve easily dumpstered Sun and Roman but it needed the same way cannon did.

Always enjoyed Kisame in the source material, and you seem to be doing him justice.

Nice chapter didn’t really see any grammar issues that bothered me enough to be pointed out but it’s was It was a set of interaction and building of Kisames team and partners gj

I like this story. I'm hoping you make it clear whether or not Kisame and some other Shinobi are reincarnated or originally born in this universe or what. I see some of the techniques being used but That could be chalked up to a semblance. Only flaw that kind of annoys me is that when you do something like 'Weiss suddenly felt guilty because of this' When it flows better (in my opinion) when its just 'Weiss suddenly felt guilty'. Either way I'll be watching excitedly for updates.

It's always Kushimaru who ends up being one of the bad guys in fics featuring the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. A bit of a shame cuz he's so cool, but it makes sense considering his horrifying style of fighting.

I'm really happy that you updated the story and I hope you still have the drive to continue writing it I especially like how you incorporated the seven ninja swordsmen in the RWBY universe and how well you incorporated his past into the story keep up the amazing work can't wait to see what happens next

Sorry I can't offer more of this review

Yes! An update! Thank you. I'll be honest, the seven swordsman are like my favourite characters in naruto, and since rwby us one of my favourite animes, this fanfic is litterally perfection for me. Thank you for this!

Yyooo I remember this story it was so cool then I just stopped reading fanfics for a while nice to see it still going honestly a gem in a pile of trash keep doing your stuff author

God, reading real characters interact with RWBY characters makes me hate RWBY more because of how one dimensional they are, especially when they are confronted with anything that doesn't agree with their tender beliefs

Very good story, hopefully you can and want to update. In any case, I am attentive.

This is very nice and i cant wait for more.

Real bummer you seem to have dropped this

Quite interesting.

I love your story I can't wait to see him participate in the festival God help anyone who takes on the land shark

Keep up the amazing work can't wait to see what happens next May we meet in the halls of Valhalla