Will done I injoyed it

aw so cute! Kawaii! I loved it.

Just reviewin ta tell ya i enjoyed readin your story it was only the 3rd story i have ever read but i still enjoyed it none the less. It was more strate forward and less forshadowing than the others that ive read but in a good way. I couldnt help but notice that there seems to me to be a part of your story missing towards the end. But anyway it was a great story and i thought you would like to hear that. Ill be looking forward to reading more fanfics of yours.

that was a great story i loved how u had duo writing the actual story and then i also liked how u had a writer embrace the slahsy side of writing too bad most dont do that lol

well thanks for the great read

I really like your story. You do seem to have a little bit of trouble with spelling; for example, you said 'faze', writing it phonetically. It is actually phase, a word which I'm sure you are familiar with but maybe did not connect with this context. Also, occasionally you have troubles with homophones (like "then" rather than "than", or vice versa) or you add a 'd' where there should be none (or you miss a 'd'). For example, mixing "confused" and "confuse".

But I really really like this story! Keep it up! D

I just want you to know I really like your stories esp. this one. The epilogue was really fantastic. Hope you write more 1x2 like this one.

I loved this fic. It was awsome. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing it.

Heather and Diane are a crack up. I love them. I can tell this fic is going to be great. I can't wait to finish it.

LOVED it! D it's wicked swanky! it was so well written and the plot was good too. I couldn't help but laugh at all the fangirls Duo got for his story, because it's of so true. (except the part where Duo wrote it)

and I just wanted KILL his publisher! GR, she made mad! but I'm very glad about Duo getting a much better publisher from Heather's boyfriend's father. (that's fun to say ) though I'm curious to know what happened between Heather and Alec.

really liked it! and keep on writing!

And a wonderfully sappy and apprpriate ending. The lemon was nice - though I would have wished for more, hentain fangirl that I am - and Heather was a breath of fresh air after reading so many badly done, Mary-Suish OCs. Bravo, SA. :)

And its just that simple - a realization, and a kiss. So sweet... :)

Ah, I like where this is going - lemon, here I come! *cough* Pun not intended...

Just like 'Odin' to put it bluntly like that, no lead-up or fanfare: I'm in love with you.

And now Heero's coming out of his shell. Good for Duo!

Talking about the plot differences between fanfiction and the show/book/what-have-you. I liked that bit; it was very realistic. If an author ever got together with fanfic writers I think that would be a major point of conversation: "If it was fanfic, I'd read it, but not in a novel."