Nicely written, good pace, no unnecessary trivia. Lacks power and emotion but what this short story does, it does quite well.

- Hip

i love it

Great story. Thank you.

Thank you for writing. I saw your review on Neale's, Back In Black, story and decided to check out your account to see if i found anything I like. I'm glad I did. Thank you for writing.
Oh, I didn't review about the, November, story, but it always amazed me that such a supposedly smart man would leave a baby on a doorstep, especially in November.

Okay, the expression fits a lot better into Dumblefumble's rhetoric, but as Chief Warlock, or even just member of the Wizengamot, Dumblefumble should know that murder and what really happened only have in common that someone is dead. And Harry didn't even murder Riddle. Both are combatants in a war, killing that way is not murder. And: You can only murder a person. Riddle was a magical construct, at the most it was damage to property. And that the Death Munchers tied their magic and life to Riddle, or that Riddle was able to suck them dry is hardly Harry's fault. He, as a combatant, fought Riddle. Period. Everything else is not "wanton murder". So Dumbledore is a bald-faced liar. And normally most of the sheep just nod and follow him mindlessly. Baaa.

The reason why the Weasels don't take the floo is NOT the handful of floo powder. Instead of spending a few knuts for floo powder they spend a hundred galleons for the taxis. Unless they just obliviate the drivers... Wouldn't surprise me, though. Mr. Weasel's job requires him to be adept with that...

Honestly, in one scene Mrs. Weasel feels the corners of their vault to find ONE five-Pound-coin. The rest is smaller change. Then they rent three taxis from Devon to London. Beside the cost, which is comparably astronomical for the Weasels, it takes 6-7 hours to drive, including inner-city London, and only a couple seconds to floo. They do that because they have a massive (literally translated from my language) roof damage, or because it's part of some plan.

Btw, the "handful of floo powder" I mentioned above is for all of them, unlike for the Harry in your story. Canon says: a pinch. The movies show a handful as large as possible with lots trickling down for Ronald. My headcanon insists on the idea that the less magical power a magical has the more floo powder they need. Thus, a big handful for Ronald.

Good job. I know you wrote this a while ago, but I only just now found it.

Normally stories where Harry goes to Gringotts for help turn into Super!Harry stories. Thank you for not doing that.
PS. I hope the sheep are well.

I hope Dumbo is locked out of GP, and Harry can have Kreacher and Dobby set up some safeguards before he arrives. Unless Dumbledore somehow found out that the Horcruxes self-destructed, he will try to get Harry back to 4PD. I hope Harry tells him to shove off if he tries anything.

Dumbledore will doubtless be furious that Harry has heard the will and has been "cleansed" himself as well as emancipated. Should be fun!

Won't Dumbledore figure out where Harry is, if Phineas mentions Dorea? How many places where Harry could conceivably go have her portrait?

What a great story! I found it by following your link on your review of Sinyk's new story. I really enjoyed your method of dealing with Voldemort. "Remote control" vanquishing is always my favorite way, regardless of the specific method.

I think Bill's set-down of Dumbledore (including the "Grow up, Mum" comment) is my favorite moment, followed closely by Harry laying down the law to old Walburga.

Rather than simply marrying him off to Ginny, or whomever you choose, I hope the focus of any sequel deals with Harry dealing with the corrupt Wizarding government and helping rebuild it into a more equitable MAGICAL government that serves all Magical beings. There is sure to be plenty of fodder for drama with the likes of Dumbledore, any unmarked Moldy supporters, and the DE offspring on the loose. I look forward to reading what you create.

Thanks for an enjoyable story.

What fun!

quick and fun. great job. following in case you do a sequel, hoping that you will post an update in this story for the notification.

This was a right treat - Thank you!

good one. I like shorts like this, where one little trick resolves the whole problem.