Well, this is a surprise! I didn't really realize there was a section for "Absolver". Good start.

I could probably sit here and read your description of the environment for ages. If there was a book filled with just descriptions of different areas and it was written by you, i'd buy it.

The way you describe Vegas' fits and emotions is really well-done too, and i can p easily imagine (and feel) it.

This story is very good

I don't have an actual review to make but this is some good shit bro. Really enjoy the game world and never thought about the issue of the rogues. lskjdfalkfaslkf just keep writing this, even if it's just something you do in your free time. Dunno if the last chapter is like a final thing but me likey

I know I'm very late with this, I've read the whole story and just like I need MOAR! This was an absolutely wonderful read the way you used your words. I was originally gonna just read one chapter then go on with my day but I just kept reading and didn't stop. Idc how long it takes but I just require more Vegas and maybe more about Elijah and Sophi.

Great story so far really loving the writing as well

Interesting, I wish there was more stuff for this game. Maybe, with the Downfall update, you could work the revelation that the guides caused the Downfall into the story?

the story this far has been...interesting? I dont know if that word can fully represent my meaning right now though, the narrative and atmosphere between the characters and the general mood gets very wavy and nearly rhythmic (does that sound weird? because I don't have any other way to say it right now), not in a bad way though

Risryn gave of the near exact same vibes as she does ingame, so you captured that well, you also (at least to me) succeed in making the other characters: like Vegas, the two prospects and the missionary absolver, who I don't remember the names of, but that not because they weren't memorable, well, some of them weren't particularly interesting, I liked the two prospects nostalgia as an idea, but it could have been done better, if the reader is a fan of anything similar to this, they might have already seen that parallel been done exactly the same way multiple times, and trust me, there ARE ways to make that feel good, realistic, or still immersive, you just barely missed it

BUT you also get bonus points for having the first serious take (if not the first take in general) on absolver fanfiction, like seriously, as someone who often has had a very sunken level of expectations for fanfictions, you managed to still rise my expectations and diminish my reluctance to keep reading at an accelerating pace as the story progressed. so good on you man

You are the only one who did this fic and this is the only fic in this category. Congrats. Also, suggestion, a crossover with avatar the last Airbender and legend of Korra, Naruto where Naruto becomes the master absolver and lastly, mlp him where human enter Equestria and become/is an absolver and bring true martial art to the land and/or becomes a hero absolver. What u think? U can take credit, just please make these fics or suggest these to someone who can do this. Please?

Brilliant, enjoying this so far

Bookmark this fanfic for later. Absolver's a good game, but man is it not getting much love here. You don't stop though.