Reviews for Avatar of the Spider God
dheathking4821 chapter 3 . 10/19
Cool Will this continue ? Brosky
emoryjmorrill chapter 3 . 4/1
Great would love to see more chapters.
NightBringer325 chapter 3 . 3/4
So unless I've mistaken my Geography the Harry has run into two High Elves though what they want with and why is another question altogether if it isn't some unfortunate coincidence. If I am wrong and its Wood Elves Harry can just point at the Dragon and say I'm waiting for it to leave so as not to fight it. Not likely to really help him but at least the elves cant say he intruded without good reason since a dragon just landed nearby even if he has a massive fuck off spider with him.
xXxnarusasuxXx chapter 3 . 12/27/2019
I like.
LoganTheLoneWolf chapter 3 . 8/31/2019
Interesting story hope you continue it.
koper chapter 3 . 7/6/2019
Its awesome story
Are you going to continue it?
TheHaackMeister chapter 3 . 1/11/2019
update soon please
King-Naberius chapter 1 . 10/14/2018
Damn, this is pretty good. I hope to see more Chapters in the future.
Azathoth the Supreme Overlord chapter 3 . 9/21/2018
continue?
JrOfDirt1998 chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
*your not dead. Christ that's a typo.
JrOfDirt1998 chapter 3 . 8/3/2018
Fucking tree huggers. I'm looking forward to more chapters. I wonder if you could include any beastmen culling since they're mortal enemies of the wood elves in the future. Seeing more of Harry's impact on the world would be cool and maybe taking a more active role against chaos gods. Anyway I hope
your dead or anything since its been awhile. thanks
Guest 47 chapter 3 . 7/12/2018
Also maybe Dark Elf Naruto could come home with the heads of some legendary figures like Wulfrik the Wanderer, Throgg the Troll King, Taurox the Brass Bull, Malagor the Dark Omen, Alith Anar the Shadow King, Arkhan the Black might as well get some Tomb Kings to like him, Sigvald the Magnificent becoming Slaaneshs new intrest and the man of her desire because I think it would be cool if he had the aid of one of the Chaos Gods and maybe getting her to tone down on the whole eating his people's souls thing oh and finally and Valkia the Gore Queen

Even if he just returned with five or six heads like Arkhans, Sigvalds, Malagors, Throggs, Wulfriks and Alith Anars still a impressive display but still be cool if he showed of the heads of all of them to his people to show his power

Then he can get around to killing his brother and reuniting all the Elves
Guest 47 chapter 3 . 7/2/2018
Can't wait to see Harry consume more Gods btw

I think it would be great if he ate the likes of the Horned Rat that would really mess with the Skaven as they all live in fear of their God and if something killed it well then they'd be even more scared of Harry plus then the Skaven can start slaughtering each other even more than they already do

Hashut would be another God he could devour for more power plus it would endear him even more to the Dwarfs as the death of the Chaos Dwarfs god would severely weaken them leaving them open to be wiped out by the Dwarfs and Ogres

The Fire Mouth could be another minor God Harry devours

Also will we see Neferta appear before Harry

Oh yeah for Dark Eld Naruto you could also pair him with some of the Elves Goddesses hell Spider God Harry could as well along with the Ancestor Goddesses Valaya
Guest 47 chapter 3 . 7/1/2018
Have you thought of doing a Warhammer fic with say Naruto as the brother of the Witch King Malekith therefore the Son of Aenarion and Morathi

Naruto could be just as great and powerful as his brother but the fic could open with him returning home after traveling the world gaining even more power than his brother with the two having a duel to see who will get the others power Naruto wins becomes the Lord of the Dark Elves and sets his sights on uniting all the Elves and becoming the Black Phoenix King

The pairing could include the likes of Morathi, Hellebron ( if she's added Naruto taught her the secrets of Morathis eternal youth thus earning the blood queens eternal loyalty ) Alarielle as his Everquee, Aliathra the Everchild, Elydra, Ariel basically any notable elf and maybe a vampire or two
Ranmaleopard chapter 2 . 5/27/2018
This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more. I had an interesting thought with a little bit of a crossover with the forgotten realms, maybe have Harry devour Lloth the spider goddess of the drow. Please continue
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