| Reviews for The Mind of the Lost |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 1/6 This is a very good start to this story. The plot seems very cool especially since the themes behind it and the pairing of Harry and Daphne (I'm guessing?) are things that appeal to me. Its really nice and I hope you're still active in fanfiction. I know this hasn't been updated in a long time but it would be really nice if you could update this story. Really interesting so far! |
 Tyler'sPrincess chapter 2 . 8/14/2019 Interesting start to a story. Honestly, this almost in som ways feels like it would a natural response to a lot of what Harry went through if Hermione hadn't supported him. Even thus with a somewhat difficult balancing act in 4th year. Ron was such a git. I love that we see Harry get someone sooner who can kind of relate here. In canon until Harry realizes the truth about Neville. I'd like to see more of this story. |
| DipstickMadden chapter 2 . 1/6/2019 More! |
| mumphie chapter 2 . 12/19/2018 ch.2 - Your story is very good. Your dialogue and how you've woven the character interactions and storyline is wonderful. It has been a year since you last posted, I truly hope you will come back. |
| loulou's revenge chapter 2 . 11/2/2018 it's a shame this hasn't been updated in nearly a year. I really hope you continue soon, it's such a good start and your writing is excellent despite a few minor mistakes. |
| Hank1967 chapter 2 . 10/4/2018 Very well done. I like how the story is progressing and hope you will write more! |
| Hank1967 chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 Excellent start! I hope you will continue with this story. It's got a lot of potential. The start with getting Harry and the Slytherins together was nicely conceived and a little bit different from the way everyone else does this. The one thing I might suggest is to go to the very beginning and flesh out the third task a bit more. You have a major divergence from canon that wasn't explained. A little explanation would make it a better read. (Not that I'm complaining - I like this story!) |
| camp1500 chapter 2 . 8/14/2018 good start. too bad you have yet to complete it. |
| eagleshadow chapter 2 . 7/7/2018 AMAZING hope you write more of this story love to see where your mind takes it Regards Steve |
| mabdurrehman chapter 1 . 5/30/2018 hope you update the story soon. |
| FlowerChild23 chapter 2 . 5/2/2018 Oh man please update soon last update was December 2017. This is really really good. It's nice to see a story that's not about malfoy being the one to help harry. |
| deppenjaeger chapter 2 . 4/30/2018 nice one, i like it, any chance that you continue it or is it abandoned? |
| XxDragon King DragneelxX chapter 2 . 4/9/2018 This story is brilliant! We're us the rest? I hope you update soon this is brilliant and has really caught my interest I can't wait for more! |
| Twistaout chapter 2 . 4/1/2018 Will you be continuing this story? |
| dephunkt chapter 2 . 2/11/2018 off to a good start, can't wait for more |
