I've already reviewed, so I must do this on guest. I love Sloane's introduction. She seems to fit in quite seamlessly to things. I also love your characterization of the canon characters...they are very "in character" So, kudos on that! Thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with us! Happy Holidays! #ocficmas

yes yes yes a thousand times yes keep going!

I loved the beginning part when they were talking about "you know who" haha. ;) Voldemort? lol. Just kidding! haha. I like getting to see Sloane interacting with canon characters and I loved hearing more about Sloane and her relationship with Tony. Such a sweet story. :)

SISTER?! WHAT? WHAT? I SO DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! WHATTTTTTT?

Great chapter, friend! :) Hoping this finds ou well. :)

I really enjoyed reading this! I like how you incorporated Sloane into things. Her introduction was well done. It was cute to see her interacting with Pepper, which led to a perfect way to get the story rolling. And then meeting the rest of the team. I loved it! I am curious to see how Sloane will play into things more.

Thank you for taking the time to write this and share it with us! I know it isn't always easy, but your hard work and heart show in your writing. Wishing you well!