Bro im hard as fcuk now my nigga i love the description of camilas tits OwO

mm yes more sexi sex

LOve this chapter, Almost as much as Camilla loves Corrin! :D Can't wait to get more of this story. You just seem to capture Camilla's "crazy" so perfectly, keep up the great work!

Great first chapter and I am really liking yandere Camilla. I wonder how will corrin will survive Under her care and maybe Camilla will try to hide him from her siblings so she can keep him to her self

Although it appears that I arrived at this story rather late, I'm glad that I found it. Ever since the initial reveal of Fire Emblem Fates, I've been a huge fan of Camilla and her sexy big sister/yandere personality. She's beautiful yet incredibly dangerous as well. However, to my disappointment, I've been unable to find many fanfics that really delve into the obsessive yandere parts of her personality.

Then to my joy, I find this fic.

And holy cow is this story engrossing. The premise alone pulled me in (me being a yandere fan probably helped), and I think it really captures that loving, mentally damaged obsession that made me a Camilla fan in the first place. I like that your story portrays Camilla's love as genuine, but clearly from a dark place as her thoughts are always centered around her feelings for Corrin, while also constantly coming up with insane justifications for her actions. Likewise, I think you nailed Corrin's character in that he obviously doesn't approve of Camilla's actions, but loves her too much to truly stand up to her. That kind mental conflict is a major appeal to Fates as a whole, and I'm glad that it's present here. Then of course, there's the sexier parts of the story where you can tell that Corrin's mental barriers are slowly yet surely crumbling under the weight of Camilla's love. The romantic scenes are both twisted and hot, just as it should be with any yandere story.

In addition, I'm pleasantly surprised to see that the outside story wasn't neglected. Seeing the interactions of every other character helps to flesh out the plot and make it more believable. I enjoy how there's a growing sense of tension as more and more characters become more suspicious of Camilla, and the fact that there's even inklings of a renewed Nohr/Hoshido war is interesting as well. Making Felicia have a crush on Corrin is also a nice touch, though I hope she doesn't get hurt too bad.

As you might have already guessed, I'm completely rooting for Camilla :). I want nothing more than to see Camilla win everything, and for Corrin to be corrupted into an obedient and loving little brother who appreciates the love of his older sister. Though I noticed that this fic is little old, so perhaps you have moved on. But either way, if you do see this review, I just want you to know that I had a blast reading it, and I'll be reading some of your other stories when I get the chance. You've written a great story, and you should know that.

Love it hope you keep updating

Please continue this! I've gotten so hooked on it that I check daily to see if you updated! I just love the idea of a yandere Camilla!

I want to see more. This is a great read. Please update soon.

I'm definitely liking this, despite of the kind-hearted image I have from my sweet Camilla.
It is like I can read what you've done to her because it reminds me to the one self you meet about her in Birthright. Every character is on its spot.
My only wish is that Felicia won't get hurt... She's so pure, please, don't touch her :c that would make me really sad...
One last thing. Is it normal that you're using "Bekura" instead of "Beruka"?

Keep up the good work! I like the many differences between pov you're using!

I would like more detail of like Comella's spiral into madness

So Jakob and Felicia are heading to Northern Fortress this will not end well for them once Camilla finds out.

Im loving this and this feel like what Camilla would do though not as bloody but can wait to see where this goes.

Applause for keeping Camilla psychotically IC.

Yeah, come to think of it, it IS disturbing that the yandere is the one with the stealthy, silent assassin for a retainer... perfect for stalking-by-proxy...

Yipes.

...haaaaa, I just remembered. Leo's biggest objection will be that it wasn't HIM Camilla tied up, won't it?

Camilla has never HAD mental health, Corrin. She just has excellent bluff rolls.

TBH, this is the only way I can see Corrin/Camilla. They're mentally siblings, even if not physically so, and Camilla's... not well in the head, having coped with lifelong trauma and abuse by burying herself in the graceful-mature-woman/yandere-older-sister persona. She canonically goes crazy when Corrin leaves. If an incestuous relationship develops with a deeply mentally-unstable family member, it's not going to be innocent healthy fluff. Fluff, maybe, but not the healthy kind...