Reviews for Too Late to Make a Sound
AHSloverr chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
The black hood actually shipped them together
Marissa Davis chapter 1 . 4/9/2018
As let usual this was great! Love your Archie and Betty stories!
cupcakelover.mel chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
loved this...sad ending :(
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Aw, this was so sad, but satisfying! I like how you made Archie admit to himself he's the reason why they never got together, as not many writers do that xx
lookingforthestars chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
I really don’t care much about Archie on the show but I found him a lot more sympathetic here. You did a good job getting into his brain. I’ve never bought his relationship with Veronica (she seems way more into him) and he’s never seemed to fully accept Betty dating Jughead. I’m curious to see if there will be friction there in the future. But yeah I just found this interesting because there’s no right answer, like he knows how she and Jug feel about each other and he’s kicking himself for missing his chance, I think this is probably super close to the show and it was really well written.
luvin-benadam chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
Ah I'm intrigued! I hope you plan on continuing this