It’s a shame this story isn’t being update due to technical problems, this story has a very interesting concept and I would love to see more of this. Hope the issues get fixed and you can continue where you left off

Hey there folks,
So uh, this is the writer. I'm not entirely sure what happened, but fanfiction has mysteriously decided to not let me into the original account, even though I have both the original email and password. One day I logged in and attempted to add another chapter, but it turns out I had been given a new username (which was the same as the old with a 1 added to the end), and no stories under my management tab. I'm emailing support to try to get the account back, but for the forseeable future, this account and story is dead. Sorry bout this, and until next time.

So is this getting a update any time soon

Just brilliant. The Covenant afterall has hundreds of Super carriers alone, and high Charity is larger than the citadel. Not everyone in the citadel would happily fight such a galactic giant, even to stop genocide afterall. The Covenant existed for thousands of years, I'd it wasn't for the flood, the Infinity would have see its original purpose.

There's not much to write about this story yet, so perhaps you'll have a rabbit to pull out of the hat.
But for once, I'd like to see a story where all the nations have - and very clearly show - the competing interests and friction between different groups within each nation. In this case, I'm hoping that you don't swing into making many Turians instantly supportive of humans and many Asari all somehow agreeing on 'screw the humans'. And perhaps us actually seeing power shifts, like Tevos being removed as pro-human-intervention groups take power in the Republic and place their new Councillor, but still running into roadblocks with the humans, turians, and others because the damage has been done.

great crossover concept. can't wait for more

30 minutes of endless screams...that sounds incredibly retarded...not to mention - physically impossible.

Good chapter.
Keep on going.

Good chapter.

Interesting intro.

Turians teaming up with humans and the asari being dodgey fuckers? Love these sorts of stories, keep it up!

Your story is really promising, keep it up.

The title has two spaces before ‘Thunder’.

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I like it I’m on board wonderful chapter