Intresting start. I’d like to see more of this

Oh, this has taken an interesting turn. With the house burned to the ground, Charlie will have to stay with Bella, and Aro is with Carlisle. I'm so looking forward to seeing where you will take this. Thank you for updating!

hoping you update soon, great chapters so far! :)

hi there, just wanted to let you know i was the anon who posted a little while ago - i hope you continue with this story, there aren't nearly enough aro fics out there as i'd like, and i like the direction this one seems to be going in

keep up the good work! :)

this story is really interesting so far, i will enjoy seeing where this goes, there aren't enough aro stories out there, and there needs to be. he's probably the most fascinating character in the series, along with marcus. i hope you continue this and update frequently! :) keep up the good work!

i really do hope you continue with this - when she shows up, aro will clearly have the vampire equivalent comforts of a blanket and hot cocoa on his person LOL

he's a hot mess 3 poor baby haha

I like Diana and Jax. Great chapter!

Oops, that last review by Guest was me. I didn't realize I was not logged in.

Oh, this is going to be interesting. Diana is an interesting character. She has a vampire friend who's breaking the Volturi laws, so she knows all about vampires. She also seems to be unhappy, and very uncomfortable in her own skin, not to mention probably not too trusting. I'm very curious to see what happens when she meets Aro.

Oh wow, what a great beginning! I've very curious to see where you take this. Aro obviously is rethinking is immortal life.

Oh, this looks like it's going to be such an intriguing story. I love it. So Aro has sort of lost his mind. He's in so much pain. I get the feeling he's about to have a change of heart. Please update soon!

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Chapter 3: Diana Angel
then suddenly a girl read a Dating ad Wanted a nice but good looking Woman must be Greek but Italian born That Excuse me madam he sighten her picture you arran ged a m ate I May remarry again Diana stand forth this Aro as you wish high master then kneel What ye gomes from time of The the Beginning without Change this is the Vulcan heart this the Vulcan soul this our Way Aro do you take Diana to be your mate do you burn I Burn High Mster My Eyes is Flame My hert is Fire Diana do you Burn with him as your husband so bet it with this sliken ribbon of mating I Declare ye Joined then Volturi stepped up Master who is she my wife is trained this is her Diana here's the rules you will grant us a female bear it it will be called Helen see it at on ce yes your reverence what is she doing tom e Aro she's Bene Gesserit will be a Queen then news of a Volturi Bene Gesserit queen and lady then her self was Dtrsssed from DUNE From 1984 holy cow No way yikes Volturi she's taught but trained in seduction the Voice and the Weirding she will train and tauch us a lesson then took with her herself was cold controled with things from the m ovie hair was styled in the way of Caladan noblewomen then he felt it with hers rings were magic herself knbew the mating code had to take his seeds to implan t into her body then she did was bearing a female suddenly frozen it then he woke up felt it is done husband what are your lady first tell them it's fem ale once she birthed beware she may learn from me then reached Volterra then in time she was pregn ant then news of her upcoming birth of his hyb rid Bene Gesserit daughther will bite her way without pain was all-Venomous then too late herself was con trolling poisons and toxics were then had to eat Blood for good Alec could sense it from her Mster she is human the child is will be painless free child Sister she's taught from her once she's born she will age into adulthood what her middle name shall be Irulan thennews of her birth drew near then all of Blood donations for her suddenly ovedrained then suddenly the more blood drained the heaviest the child gotten more larger carried ten months was sick then was ill had used her powers then fainted to alter own age mant times then suddenly the last count of all then too late was ill with a Vampire's was indeed female she was not well had to stay warm the more human b lood for her then the very as all then trained for her daughter named Helen Irulan Volturi she was grey-blue then it came the Royal Bene Gesserit birth of a princess then it happened the name was out then Caius Are you ok I AM FINE! BRING ARO M Y Duke AT ONCE! Then suddenly maids worked then herself did the ritual words then suddenly Suddenly the baby arrive then lost blood then Aro did arrive then Bit her hard on his wife the baby is female then the child was a girl Helen Irulan Volturi Alec I Hear her alien heartbeat you sure you are her mate in time Diana of the Volturi rose as a Vampire Queen now Helen aged to adulthood had her hair but Hazel nut eyes was programed to bear children the Volturi were in a uproar of her as a hybrid remained cold very trained in their arts had Eight girls from him now it remused now all of them had kids herself was Volturi n ow Volturi males were sterilized they were withboys now herself dressed to look like her had news to report Reneesme bore a child from her Shifter duke is lady invite them groan we are unable she's different from her mother no freaking way herself had Telekinesis so the kids were hybrids were not normal teenagers look young Aro this terrible she was sent as a wife yes Master she is named after from movie styled women yikes remarried again we both need help from here Carlisle Dia new wife is Bene Geserit did to me seduced me but with Alec was mated from her daughter both are Bene Gesserit have caused total interilty into us she's different from has a power is dressed in white that was it more to humans now three queens but Diana code spoken she's different no way they were horrified of her powers was geogenesis so animal telepathy now Volturi were unable to reproduce at all now forced to be trained under them Daughter you married them oh no look at this Aro's daughter is a hybrid Black hair loves Star Trek gone as a Vulcan priestess bonded to him his sister made a friend her mate is Male taught him to use his mentat powers gone from DUNE Egads are joined later they are mated so they used from a machine so they more of their to create kids so they again twice now they are coming by boat to take their childern to a haven where they heal but news of them were different from them.

hope fore the next part soon

Oh what an intriguing beginning. Please write more.