Where is the norths contra intelligence sporting this kidnappers

In the south I understand,but in the North were are the direwolfs and Griffins protecting the Starks.

Good story
I'm just confused as to what chapter the starks stopt being King's in as I seem to have missed it in the first 14-15 chapters

Dude I need more of this

How did tormund giantsbane get teleported to the past tf. This story makes 0 sense.

You have an interesting concept in your story that I really like, but I wonder how you will bring your story when the story cannon arrives, which will undoubtedly be a great challenge because of the changes you have made.

thanks for your story

update more!

DidI miss something? Since when was Fate a part of this story?

Having the prince go to King’s Landing with 30 men and to ask for an apology from the MAD KING. Yeah like that’s totally gonna work. You’re just doing this to kill off Brandon. What happened to the previous chapters of building up House Stark as the most powerful?

Can you explain in the next chapter just how a group of southern lord got deep into the north with NO one seeing them. I mean they have to cross the Northern riverlands and the neck just to get there. Also the story so far has shown them to be not very intelligent at all. I mean this isn't the north from asoiaf with no navy watching the coast and some ruined towers watching the neck.

nice update

So you had all these epic build up about how the North is the greatest kingdom in westeros, how they are strong enough to resist the other kingdoms, they also had no restrictions for female warriors but still lyana was not officially trained even if she wanted to which directly goes against the image you built up. And what the fuck was that shit you pulled with Brandon? I mean yeah, he's famous as the 'wild wolf' in canon but he's a fucking prince and future king now. Surely he was instructed to keep a clear head in dangerous situations, right? If not than the education system of the princes of the North has failed. How does he expect to be a ruler if he charges into enemy territory with 30 men when the enemy king is infamous for his madness? If you intentionally made Brandon this way, than just kill him off. I will not want a guy like this to drive a car let alone rule a kingdom.

At least you didn't get lyanna raped and got ned and ashara married. Those are definitely positive. Honestly I stopped reading when you introduced the fate system, this story just randomly popped up when i was browsing so i decided to take a look.

My only request is that, you've made the North way stronger and advanced than it was in canon. Just let the plot reflect it. Please don't try to force the plot to follow canon just because you want it to. That shit kills stories horribly. Anyway, stay safe and peace.

I really liked this story but having Brandon go to kingslanding and with only 30 men is ridiculous! Send a raven demanding the apology but if you are going to go south at least do so with a show of strength

Shit if I was rickard I would cut off rahegar sword hand or head and send him back what the targaryens going do try to invade shit go for it last time they did they got recked by the starks and the targaryens had dragons then. And I'm guessing the starks still go there eagles they got a big advantage if it comes to war . Like why send your son into the dragon pit like he's only taking 30 people. Like that's not a good idea no matter how overpower your family is. Also fuck arthur dayne for forgetting his house is only as strong as it is because of the starks also fuck him for going along with attacking his good brother family.