i really like the flow of this very smooth and calm. i do would like a bit more detail on their thoughts n such tho. that would be nice. overall i would love to see more

This is a great beginning. I'm already starting to understand Sonia's personality and I can see Kyoya being a little peeved about being knocked down a peg. You should go into how he became her crush a little bit though. It sounds like he was rude when they first met so not really crush-building. Although he is gorgeous lol. How you want to write the story is up to you. I like one-shots showing little scenes and I like full on chapter books. I will continue to read and review if you continue to share. Happy Writing!

Salut j'aime beaucoup tes histoires mais je me demandait si tu compte bientôt mettre à jours le reste de tes histoires

THIS IS GOOD! I can’t wait for more!

Not bad. Off to a good start

Please continue! I am really intrested!