Reviews for A Debt Paid
redfox4222 chapter 2 . 8/11/2019
Reporter: "and this is where you can hear fan girl screeching from miles away."
Me: "REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE... EIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!"
nightfall252524 chapter 16 . 2/4/2019
Is there more please
Angelmoon1089 chapter 16 . 1/1/2019
So good.
TomParisLvr chapter 15 . 11/16/2018
“You’re losing money, aren’t you?” He looked sheepish.
Omg, ROFL!
That was a sweet story. I loved Fuyumi! I loved Tamaki! I loved Honey! And the twins were just plain awesome! Who knew they were such great manipulators and that they’d encourage Haruhi to forgive Kyoya?! I also love their proposition to Haruhi about dating both of them and how gracefully they took her rejection. Kyoya’s actions were so like the Shadow King, and Haruhi throwing her drink in his face was priceless! This was a fantastic story, thank you for sharing! I can’t wait to read the epilogue.
MollyMuffinHead chapter 15 . 11/5/2018
Well, she forgives a lot easier than I do. I'd make him grovel a little more and pay for those horrific comments. Interesting about the waiting. Can teenagers really wait that long for something like that? It's been way too long for me to remember. Last couple lines were funny and so them.
Kiari Ferrari chapter 15 . 11/2/2018
Why do you do this to me? Make me ship this pair more than the canon pair? Goodness. You capture both characters perfectly and I could actually see the story going this way if it had been meant to be. Can't wait for more!
Kbeans chapter 15 . 10/29/2018
Very sweet ending. That’s a very loving and unselfish thing of Kyoya to do. We often get so caught up in romance that the couple often become stagnant in their goals and ambitions. Happy to see that Haruhi and Kyoya both have their heads on straight while loving each other. Great ending!
Alexa Hiller chapter 14 . 9/27/2018
please continue i must know whats happening im so intrigued
MollyMuffinHead chapter 14 . 9/19/2018
Nice chapter. Hikaru and Kaoru played her like a fiddle. Not sure I like the cliffhanger, but I never do unless I'm writing them. Don't want it to come to and end. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Angelmoon1089 chapter 14 . 9/18/2018
Ooo... I can't wait for the next chapter.
Alexandria Hille chapter 3 . 9/17/2018
i love it. the show isnt plot driven either so its perfect
Eliana Esquivel chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
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Darline Billingsley chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
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UqcIY chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
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