Reviews for Perseus the Peacekeeper |
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cool cats chapter 2 . 3/17 GRAMOR! Unless you want to fail English you might want to learn it. But it does have a lot of potential and a good plot |
Book worms chapter 2 . 3/17 Doesn't have very good gramor and could use a lot of work. However it has a good plot and has potential |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 4 . 2/10 Now enter chaos, and he shall smote gaea |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 1 . 2/10 What is everybody's obsession with Artemis? |
An enthusiast chapter 4 . 7/22/2018 I LOVED IT , please do more your really good! |
O719O4 chapter 1 . 6/23/2018 You have a great idea yes, but there are things wrong such as the first sentence. It was good at first but then you lost me. there are a few s |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/27/2018 Grammar dude, learn it. Your sentences are horrifying but the story is interesting. Better grammar and sentence fluency and it'll be a really good story |
Djberneman chapter 1 . 1/4/2018 You need to work on your grammar and your sentences so that they are more coherent. Otherwise, it is an interesting plot |
GoodScottish chapter 4 . 11/17/2017 I'm not a huge fan of the whole Artemis betrays him twice even though they were friends since childhood, but your story has an interesting concept so I'll stick around to see where you go from here. |
WingGrazer chapter 1 . 11/11/2017 it's good keep it up |