“I hate this game of emotions we play!Weiss Schnee Vol2 CH2

Something RWBY has always struggled with is group vs group fight. To be fair, almost every medium struggles with them, as they're very complicated. I do hope they get better though, and I thought you did a really good job portraying what might have happened off screen.

Honestly, I would be pretty happy of a whole volume, or at least several chapters, of everyone catching up, talking, and re-forging their bonds.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

This was great. It was wonderful to actually see their reunions through the filter of good literature.

So Adorable, It's enough to make a beast cry,

BUT NOT ME!

This was amazing, and I loved the small bits of Bumbleby you added in there near the end. I havent seen a beez centric story from you in a while, and I love the way you write beez.

Thankful that you added scenes that were really missing from Canon. Great work.

and now we wait for the lesbianing

Excellent reinterpretation.
See you next chapter.

I was also annoyed with that at the end of the volume. It just kinda...ended.

I was not expecting this to be updated and this to be the update. Thank you, it was amazing

That was beautiful, keep up the great work!

Oh, look. More proof of better quality writing.
By now, I'm probably sounding like a broken record, but they just don't seem to be taking the appropriate time for the script.
Any who, this gave me the warm fuzzy. :)
See you next chapter.

d'awwww

Yeah...episode 11 just hurt a lot of people, and not just what happened in the ending either. *shakes head* But I did love this reunion between Weiss/Yang/Ruby as well as the exclusive of Ruby and Weiss. And just like you, I don't think Weiss ever did tell them about what happened...

I love how you stay with what canon shows us but add so much more emotion and feeling behind it. This makes the scene ten times more... more... filling? (I’m not the best with word choice) And then that bit at the end would have been so perfect If it had been in the episode. Of course they don’t have as much room as us fanfic authors do. So yeah, great job.