This is amazing! Please please PLEASE let it not be over! It’s just...too good to end like that!

I love this fic! You are an amazing author! Please continue this fic, you are awesome!

The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all elements related to the reader and replace them all with a canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. Alternatively, you can also move it to a site where it's allowed like deviantART.