"If my timeline was correct"

Now I know that's bull honkey cause Horikoshi is a strong independent author who don't need no timelines.

Kidding. Sorry.

Older Country's not too bad.
You should watch SAO Abridged!
You don't like Fairy Tail?
I've only read part of Black Clover and liked it, but I've heard the MC's voice in the anime gets on people's nerves...
I assume the "Dorito with a god-complex" is Trump, but what's that bit about "being defeated by twelve-year-olds" about?

Pretty sure All-Might would be a terrible teacher for anyone not tuned to a brute-force based power-set. Similar to 99% of Superman's continuity he's all force, no finesse. Because he's never needed to use "delicate" movements and is able to tank 99.99% of attacks, he also has no need to dodge. He may have been taught /some/ martial arts, but it's been so long since he had to use them I doubt he'd be able to teach them to a successor (considering literally all of Izuku's training was to build up his body's strength and durability)...

Hes not telling anyone that they'll soon be attacked by an ORGANIZATION of villains? That's idiotic and a way to get people killed. He should tell the teachers, any of them but preferably the principal immediately

I love the little things like conversations at lunch, and joking around before the concert. They make the friendships feel so much more real and alive.

I Love what you did with the quirk assessment! More specifically, I love that Evan had real emotions about it and realistic reactions. He might have meta knowledge, but I wouldn’t be able to fully trust that knowledge or the people it is about until I got to know them personally, no matter how many details I remembered. His doubts and relief were very refreshing and made me feel nervous as well.

Inko is Best Mom! Also Shinsou is my fav side character so I am super happy to see him again! I think you did a good job writing his character, pessimistic but still trying to follow his dream.
Evan is screwed. Lucifer is going to kill him so hard, blackholes win every rock-paper-scissors match just saying...

So much going on for Evan, where do I even start?! The meeting with Inko and Izuku was super heart warming, something I’m always happy to see. The scene were Evan stood up to Bakugou was cool, because I think all of us have wanted to tell him off before, but I think encouraging Izuku to stand up was more important since the poor kid needed to test of courage.
I like his quirk. A lot. Smoker is one of my favorite One Piece characters and his logia powers are great in a fight. Can’t wait to see how Evan uses it.

Good first chapter! I really like that he keeps blaming everything on some “other” him because I feel like that is a more interesting coping mechanism than just shaking his fist at the sky. Also like it because he’s right XP

Definitely enjoying the impact that Evan is having so far. I wonder if he'll suggest enlisting the aid of the support students to improve their armament, allowing Mei and the others there to have a larger role.

Amazing!

Just want to say that I really like the story and would recommend playing or watching a play through of Infamous Secound Son because the main characters powers are very similar to MCs, so it way give you some ideas for you to use.

Fast and furious 15 XD

I love this chapter, sooooo awesome!

let's see where this goes