Reviews for The Lord in the Mist
Toffke chapter 1 . 7/22
You're back! I haven't checked into FF in a while, but I remember reading the beginning chapters of this story a while ago. So nice to see you again!
padfootstwin2 chapter 17 . 7/10
I don’t mind some padding but I agree as a whole it was simply an irrelevant chapter for the most part...still you have a way with words and for such a lengthy and fun story it is criminally under reviewed...I enjoy your writing and eagerly await the next chapter.
muumuu122 chapter 17 . 7/10
: I am not sure about this chapter. It might be a pleasant interlude with a few plot relevant points. It might be tiresome and pointless. Let me know.

I enjoyed it. Dumbledore's mind has always been a mystery to me. Seeing jos pow is interesting.
llIMagic chapter 17 . 7/10
I enjoyed this chapter. As long as the pause in the plot doesn't stretch too long; it isn't bothersome. It kind of jives with the patient air Dumbledore carries. Interested to see the plot threads come together. I'm surprised in the beginning Pilgrim didn't come across as more overpowered. He seems fairly passive so far. But maybe there's reasons for that. Thanks for writing!
llIMagic chapter 16 . 7/2
Wow, this is really creepy. Good writing to convey the eerie sense of it all. Pilgrim seems pretty withdrawn from the events. It's cool that he's been alive a thousand years. I wonder if the Harry he knows will show up in this story at all. I'm glad you're keeping up with this, interested to see where all these plot threads go. Thanks for writing!
Wiwerse chapter 15 . 4/8
well damn
this trilogy has been absolutely amazing and i find myself lusting for more
honestly, if this wasn't fanfiction, it would be fully worthy of publishing as books. especially book 2
quick question
What did the last line in book 2 mean? it would seem i cant get a translation of one of the words
testsuite chapter 15 . 4/7
This chapter was wonderfully creepy. And such a cliff hanger!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/7
And that plot thickens! Another great chapter, the way you describe their surroundings is always refreshing to read.
padfootstwin2 chapter 14 . 3/28
Your story is always well written. Out of curiosity do you just make up the quotes at the beginning of chapters? I can’t find them on google.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/19
I just wanted to let you know I very much enjoy these stories and have enjoyed reading this chapter. I’ve actually just started re-reading this series from the beginning having noticed this recent update.
testsuite chapter 13 . 3/16
Yay! You're back!
Freelook chapter 13 . 3/13
This story is amazing. I can't wait for more to come.
NuadhaArget chapter 13 . 3/13
I fell out my seat when I saw this updated.

You've returned my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!'

So much thanks I have to give to you. Endless inspired writings and musing on the fae, a few table top RPG campaigns inspired by your work and stories, a love for flippant and dangerously regal characters...

I would give my first and last day, and consider it a fair bargain to have this continued! Welcome back!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/13
Great chapter! I’m glad that you didn’t abandon this story. Pilgrim is super interesting.
Razorscale chapter 12 . 10/13/2019
I have read your trilogy pretty much without putting them down, and loved every word.

Thank you for writing.
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