Reviews for Restoration |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The final course of tea and biscuits sounds a bit odd but I suppose not all Brits eating at Italian restaurants in Britain would do coffee and biscotti. I have the same birthstone as Ritchie! I have never in the 23 years and five days that I worked worked in anything else than junior positions and to be honest, I prefer it thus. Let the bosses and the seniors do the real worrying and let me just show up for my work shift each afternoon. AW, as I read this bit I realised that I really wanted Dean to resurrect a long dormant house, but never mind. Yum! for that shepherd’s pie at Ritchie’s mom’s house. Yay! for Ginny’s informing and not asking for permission at The Burrow. GR! I want to kick Molly Weasley’s overly ample arse to kingdom come at her reaction to Ginny’s announcement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter, and I'm happy they no longer have to worry about the marriage laws interfering with their careers. I'm also happy to see you are still working on this story, and I hope your muse is on its way back to you full time. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is nice that the familes were willing to go with this idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hard means you might me looking in the wrong direction. Look for the children to start showing up. Then the ministry can pay up for a few years and attempt to rescind the law. However those married will take full advantage of the law to reap the benefits. The subtle changes when. Harry and his ilk become full adults with the wizengamot seats will be profound. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More of this story please. thank you love it so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry you're having a difficult time of it, but I sure couldn't tell from this chapter. I love when Harry is happy, and am glad they had such a lovely wedding. I enjoyed your creativity with Neville's injury as well. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LIKE THE CHAPTER VERY MUCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Kruger National Park isn’t all that local compared to where Johannesburg is – the two places are a four hour drive apart. “set up all the details”, not “setup all the details”. “old-fashioned” should be hyphenated. Luna’s pale yellow and peach sundress/wedding dress sounds so pretty. Poor Neville! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a lot of constructed rubbish. You should remove the character list because it's intentionally misleading. Every time I look for a decent story, this rubbish is in the results. Don't get me wrong, you can write whatever you want, but you shouldn't try to trap readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully her. Parents will forgive her and want to be of her you. More please |
![]() ![]() ![]() “set up” when used as a verb (as Kingsley used it) should be two words. Wasn’t that chicken curry something just a tad risky to offer long distance portkey travellers? Or was it meticulously prepared, so there is no risk of food poisoning? (I only ask that question because my one and only experience of food poisoning thus far was after having had a pizza with a chicken topping). “Probably hungry too”, not “Probably hungry to’. “The hotel is a short walk away”, not “The hotel is short walk”. “it’s best to be flexible”, not “its best to be flexible”. “of course it’s fine”, not “of course its fine”. |
![]() ![]() Thank You— I’m enjoying this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. I'm glad Hermione found her parents, and I hope they will become close again. |