This was sweet and cute. I was worried about Killian's distress at the beginning, I felt bad for him but knew it would work out at the end. With a lovely conclusion! So happy to see them happy with family and friends sharing the happiness. Thanks for including Liam.

Liked the way you told events from both of their perspectives. I get that Emma wanted to surprise Killian with the party and baby news but it seemed like everyone already knew about the baby before him. At least it had a happy ending!

This had me cracking up. I knew Killian was getting the wrong impression and I had a feeling it was for a surprise of some sort. Love that they're expecting and that Liam got him to leave the ship. You showed his and Emma's thoughts very well and you can't help but be excited for them. Also love the quote from The Words at the end!

And what a surprise this is - I am completely wrecked right now and so so honored.

First of all, thank you so much for taking this prompt and writing this story! I am still so stunned that you wrote that for me (and that someone knows what I love to read about :) )

This is your third published story and I feel so happy that you accepted the prompt and I like what you did with the prompt itself - there had been so many different possibilities but you chose this one - a little angst (oh how I love angst) and dramaqueen!Killian and also love and - well, thank you again

The end with the baby? great - I like that Emma didn't run and didn't try to hide her pregnancy and happiness

I am very happy they said "I love you" to each other - finally speaking out loud what they already should have said long before

Thanks again! - and yes, you made me very proud, how couldn't I be proud of you? And hey, you kept this a secret so this was more than a surprise! Well done!

I quite like this. Only, one thing just doesn't make sense to me. You alluded to the story being set after season five, at least, and that has to be right, considering the elder Liam is in Storybrooke. In that case, why the heck were they so relucted to say, or even acknowledge the L-word? After what happened in the season four finale, and later Camelot, they should be way past that.

Christ im a sappy mush right now *sniffles and wipes tears*