Reviews for Second Chances
Hollow Lives chapter 24 . 11/4/2018
Loved the story, as well as, the other stories you have written. I thoroughly enjoy reading them all. Great job!
Shrike176 chapter 24 . 10/7/2018
Nice to see the unique blend of challenges El would face at school: and how having her friends there allows her to handle them.

Well done, look forward to more.
my-secret-garden chapter 24 . 10/1/2018
I can’t stop saying how much I love Hopper! Anyway, great chapter, you captured the first day at a real school perfectly. Poor El, but she is doing great. Hopefully she will be able to relax a bit. And Natalie seems like a nice girl. Loved the party voting for less affection in public XD
tank03 chapter 24 . 9/25/2018
This was great. I'm always interested in ready how people portray a more socially adept El. I like how you have her still a little tentative, but also embracing her new life. And Mike must really be clueless if El can pick up on the girl flirting with him and he's oblivious. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Resisting-Moonlight chapter 24 . 9/24/2018
School can be rough. Lots of mouth breathers. Wouldn't be surprised if she struggles with not using her powers... Just a for Ava. Back off! He's taken..
Shian1998 chapter 24 . 9/24/2018
Another fantastic chapter! Loved this one! Enjoyed the way you showed their shared nervousness, as well as El's excitement. Loved that she started calling him Dad, and that they both said "I love you" to each other. Liked the way he described their family of broken people they'd built together. Glad El had a pretty good first day, despite the nervousness and slight panic. Glad she had her friends there with her, and that she started making some new friends as well.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
my-secret-garden chapter 23 . 9/11/2018
This was just so touching and amazing. So you know, I m crying right now.

P.S. Hahaha, I see you ve seen the ice-cream comercial with Steve
Shrike176 chapter 23 . 9/9/2018
Absolutely beautiful.

Wonderful seeing El get a chance to actually be a child and learn what summer means. Keep it up!
carrymehome chapter 13 . 9/9/2018
Ok, whichever chapter I said was painful before, I take it back. This is clearly it. Eleven has so much trauma to process.
carrymehome chapter 9 . 9/8/2018
This is such a sad chapter. I think the show explores how Hopper’s controlling behavior inadvertently hurts Eleven, but not really his emotional unavailability. The fact that she picks up on that is just heartbreaking to think about.
scarlettfawn chapter 23 . 9/8/2018
OMG I LOVED this chapter so much! I hope this is what Season 3 will look like. It gave me all the feels. You are such a great writer, keep it up! 3
carrymehome chapter 2 . 9/8/2018
The soon part killed me.
carrymehome chapter 1 . 9/8/2018
I think ST2 glosses over just how awful that month in the woods would have had to have been. Your writing of it is wonderfully done. Looking forward to a good binge read.
Resisting-Moonlight chapter 23 . 9/6/2018
Sounds like the perfect summer. The type of summer I remember before kids got too absorbed with spending hours inside playing video games. El led a crappy life for so long. Summer with her friends sounds perfect
Shian1998 chapter 23 . 9/6/2018
Another excellent chapter! Loved this one, especially since El for once managed to have an extended period of happiness. Loved that she's gradually getting more and more freedom. Glad she's having a very happy summer; going to the arcade with her friends (also glad she managed to ease her panic before it could get any worse), staying over at the Wheeler and Byers houses, going to places with the party, making friends with the Hawkins Police Department, camping with Hopper, etc. Liked the reference to the Starcourt Mall teaser. Hope El's happiness lasts a while longer.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!
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