question is English your second language? Some of your word choices make me pause. Like squished instead of squeezed or crutch instead of crotch.

i wanna read lory's reaction to this change of status... will yashiro faint or will they keep their relationship a secret for a while and have secret touches here and there...

Ahh, the "what ifs"...I absolutely love the "do over" aspect of this fanfic. Bravo writer-san!

Me encantó ...realmente creo que esta seria la mejor reaccion de Kyoko a las verdades de Ren.

Fue perfecto!

wow tanta cordura autoimpuesta ! ... a estas alturas ya me lo habria violado jajajajaja

I won't lie, it feels off that there was no "I love you" like the confession scene wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be, but it still feels incomplete to me. I need an "I love you" from both of them, but that's just me. The story was nice overall. I thought the last paragraph of this chapter was very fitting.

I have LOVED THIS FIC SO MUCH! Thank you and I can't wait to read more of your amazing works in the future xx

Even though they never said 'I love you' word by word, I feel as if they've still conveyed it to each other. 'It doesn't matter as long as it's you' for example. Really well done with this story, thanks for sharing -

LOVED IT! Wonderful ending. Thank you for sharing this one. I am looking forward to your next 8) (if you decide to do another, lol)

Gosh, I was scared Kyoko would freak out and do what she normally does in the manga or other fanfics... I love this version of them finally coming to terms of their feelings and truths I hope there's more to come and you can't stop now! you just created the perfect world for them...encore encore encore!

I don't know what's coming, but honestly I don't doubt that this was the best place to break the chapter up lol

Love how the story’s going so far. \o/

Finally! Ren had the guts to confess

I’ve been enjoying this story immensely! It’s a pretty different format but I can’t complain since I like this sort of thing hehe. I agree that unprotected sex in real life is risky but I don’t mind it in fan fiction - it’s almost more romantic because it’s like the characters were too distracted by their passion for each other. I wouldn’t even mind if Kyoko got pregnant to be honest. Anyway, great stuff! Looking forward to more!

Love it xxx