Reviews for A Family Again
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15
Why is this story marked complete when it's not?
DarkAngel chapter 1 . 7/3
Nice concept but this was way too short!
This could have been elaborated more and the story quite frankly reminds me a little bit of Roald Dahl's "Matilda".
It would have been nice if your covered all years and gave more details as to how the relationship between Severus and Harry develops. How is his relationship with his head of house and classmates? What about Sirius and Remus? At least Remus should be prudent enough to point howbtobJames how wrong his treatment of Harry is. How do Harry and Snape deal with Voldemort's return? In your fic the philosopher's stone was stolen, which means Voldemort successfully obtained it but then you don't mention anything of his return.
Your idea had the potential to be a quite long story, too bad you only kept it as a one-shot. I really enjoyed it though.
Well done!
sakshiagarwal017 chapter 1 . 6/30
nicely written
Would be a pleasure if you read one of my book sakshiagarwal017
Latarra chapter 1 . 6/17
Well-written, interesting story.
BlueBell227 chapter 1 . 3/30
It would be cool to see Lily's reaction to how James treated their son and how Severus took over guardianship.
The Dark One Rising chapter 1 . 2/22
This is absolutely adorable. I am mildly concerned about later years, but I don’t really want to think about it. I’ve read enough fics along this vein that I can speculate how to make things end nicely. They will end nicely, in my mind. It is possible, and I do not wish to think much on the alternative.
PinkMusicalCherry chapter 1 . 2/16
beautiful
Wakefielddickson chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
Oh my HEART. oh thank you so much for this
Jonn Wolfe chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
Oof. This needs a full story. I need to know what happens next.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2019
I don't understand - why is this marked complete?
Unknown chapter 1 . 10/9/2018
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Okay, someone get me a spoon, a rusty butter knife, a map, some dark creatures, and Tartarus stat. James Potter you gonna die tonight.
On a side note, I love your Snapes. They are adorable.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 9/19/2018
I never thought I would ever wants to scream "I LOVE YOU SORTING HAT WITH ALL MY HEART AND MY SOUL!" until I read this fic.
God... I LOVE The Sorting Hat! I'm really gonna cry now!

Severus taking care of Harry.
Going to Chamber of Secrets with him.
and become his Guardian.

God... thank you!
LifeMeansNothingWithoutMusic chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
It's great one-shots like these I see potentially becoming multi-chapter fics. You gave enough details that make it a wonderful one-shot but if there ever is a time you would like to expand this fic into a longer more in-depth version, I'll be there to read it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
wow just wow
magicanimegurl chapter 1 . 6/20/2018
This was sad yet beautiful. The ending was good. I almost wanted to cry. Write on!
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