Extremely well written. Although some of the parts did annoy me only as I’m a die hard Ron Hermoine Harry fan. You can tell that a very talented person wrote this who has a gift. I hope you continue to write. Very good work!
All the best

Beautifully twisty.

Splendid story. Severus and Petunia ... a very unanticipated pairing that led to a very successful outcome for the wizarding world in Britain as well as Harry and his family.

Loved the story and your presentation of Lucius and Severus. Would definitely read more!

Well done,thank you

Excellent Story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. You definitely have quite unique and thoughtful ideas and I love your writing style and your characterization too.

I liked this. I thought Remus' death was entirely unnecessary - tossed in like a badly misjudged idea thought to be sensational but that should have been deleted - and didn't like how Sirius was treated so badly...but aside from that, the rest of the story was really, really good, and quite well written, too.

Good story

Thanks so much for the terrific story.

Wonderful story.
I'm disappointed with myself that I hadn't found your works sooner. But now that I have found them I'll be reading heaps of them.

I like your 'fast paced with detail' style, and your world-wise approach to the orignal work. Bravo

Yes - this is good reading to, I lerned new word ((oubliette))
I might get used to read 'Good Snap' tye storys - Thank you.
/S

You do know that you are only supposed to post ONE chapter per document, right, and not every single chapter?

I'm about to weep with how well you tie up all the loose ends and use them as drawstrings to close loopholes
rock on

Snape scrubs up nicely...lol. Great story!

Thanks, I like it :-)