Corto, bien escrito y con una relación entre los personajes que le es agradable n.n
Buen trabajo 3

Ed is so cute in this! I love how you make the two characters interact, it's both heartwarming and comical XP

That was absolutely sweet

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Yes! Thank you Roy for helping the poor boy. Could any of us spell in the fourth grade? Heck, I still can't spell and I'm definitely a lot older than that! I also love the way you wrote it so Roy isn't an ass about it...to many people just have them fight about everything but it is so refreshing to have Roy act like the guardian he is and should be. Thank you for writing this!

This is super cute! I love parental Roy!

So cool I love the ones where Ed is a kid in the military

AWWW! That was so cute! I've actually written about this before, but I took a different approach. Instead of working on improving his writing I had Mustang require orally given reports instead. My idea was a little less proactive, and I really enjoyed seeing this unfold in a direction that I didn't take. Great job!

Awwwwwwww this was so cute! I really liked how you addressed the fact that Ed never finished school. I feel like that's something a lot of people, including myself, forget about. Anyways, this was awesome! Well done!

Hah! I was laughing good at this, well established humor ;) good job, do update soon or with a new story.

Well done.

This. This is so totally Roy and Ed. Oh man. Perfect.