The last sentence was a perfect ending! This was so good: the description, the dialogue, the characterization. Thanks for sharing your writing!

This was very good. I was worried when Neal was shot and bleeding badly and pleased at how Peter held on to him until the ambulance arrived and through the hospital. Peter and El caring for Neal at their home was lovely. Neal painting the room, and then sharing a sketch was generous and the Neal we know and love.

That was a really nice one! Always love to read stories showing the close and special bond between Neal and Peter. You captured their unlikely friendship well.

Awwwww...great ending!

I love that Peter and El want to take care of Neal.

Fam yaaaassssss

Awe that was good!

This was amazing! Great story and writing! An awesome finish too

Great updatewaiting for the next chapter

nice

Hey Greymajesty! I finally got some time to sit down and read this!
Fantastic story! I love how well of a job you did with keeping the character's very similar to the TV show. Great job! I hope there's more to come!
-Skye

By the title I was expecting fluff, like a present or somethingit was a good twist

Great job! Dare I hope there is more to follow?

hope you'll finish it

hope there's more to come..