I mostly like your stories except that you make such an effort to show that your characters have an accent that most time I don’t know what they say, especially McGonagall. In the stories where she is a major character, it means I lose quite a bit.

I really don’t know why some authors go this far to deform their text, it is so much easier when there is something like “she was so angry/afraid... that her Scottish accent was almost not understandable” and then normal writing.

A shame because I really like your stories and had to stop reading some when I couldn’t take the accents anymore.

I enjoyed this. It was well written and concepts were well thought out. I was a little disappointed that the denouement was so abrupt after such a well-crafted and detailed set-up.

Excellent story telling, loved it! I would totally read more!

Another excellent story... Thanks for posting all these great stories!

Good story

Excellent! Thanks so much

A satisfying story. Thank you.

The enemy of my enemy is not my friend. He can be, of course. But it's not a given. The enemy of my enemy is nothing ore than a potential ally...

Thanks, I like it :-)

Very good.

Another good one! I'd like to know more, that is, have it fleshed out a tad more. How was the day to day, did Neville finally get his new wand and did his Gram accept him, did Ron learn to keep his mouth shut, how was Ginny's crush - was it crushed to find Harry gone, did anyone other than their group know about who Harry is now, what extra classes did the kids take, with Dumbles gone - did the school offer more extras, what did the kids decide to do for a living, who did they end up with, and did Harry learn about his heritage of the Potters, Peverilles, and Founders?

This story was very good, the ending seemed a l ittle rushed but then it wouldn't be easy to end it without making it a whole lot longer. I like your version of snape, he isn't an easy character to write. I'm glad you explained the jam sandwich reference,that one had me scratching my head.

Thank you very much for a sweet read with a much happier life for young Harry after he turns five. I like seeing Severus Snape as a parent.

xxxxx KUDOS xxxxx : )

This was very entertaining. Snape's line in the Pizza shop especially made me giggle. It's rare for me to be able to buy into a good Snape story, but your reasoning was very sound. As horrifying as the inspiration for this was, it's very likely that his magic was the only reason Harry didn't end up in the dustbin. I'm always amazed when people think they need to increase his mistreatment to show abuse. He was confined in a cupboard without food on a regular basis, didn't know his name until they were forced to send him to school which they likely only allowed because he'd been seen tending the garden and smacked in the head with a skillet by Petunia and had his arm broken by Dudley and company. How much more abuse do you need?