Nice

(cont.)... but at least it was entertaining. If you ever get the motivated to write again, please don't forget about this one!

It's a shame that this project has been killed. I mean, sure, it followed all the stations of canon

Hahaha, using a noble phantasm on cabbages!

Someone else should continue this. Whats the author gonna do after all he abandoned the story.

That ending though XD

Too bad this fic is apparently finished, assuming the 'complete' tag is correct. I liked how you kept Shirou at least sort of balanced, by pointing out the lack of class cards and support by Miyu, to prevent him from just UBWing every boss they come across. Seriously, Beldia would've instantly died if UBW was activated and he was skewered by millions of swords. It also keeps Shirou's portrayal as someone who is going to be outclassed in almost every fight, and has to beat his enemies through sheer determination. Though, you'd think Shirou would know well enough to use holy swords against his undead enemies (black keys are fine and all, but they're no noble phantasms).

Anyways, it was a fun fic, hope it gets continued one day.

Wow, I love the decision for miyu-verse Shirou to take a older brother role to Megumi. It makes a lot of sense for the character, and is a neat way to bring him into the plot (though I'm not sure why Megumi was okay with it). Also, it must be massively ironic to Shirou that he's taking care of someone who has talent for multiple types of magic but purposefully hamstrings herself to a single spell, whereas he had to overspecialize simply out of necessity.

One concern is just how much of a monster Shirou is going to be, and how it's going to be difficult to avoid trivializing every challenge by shooting a sword at hypersonic speed. Especially since he doesn't even use the skill system, so with it, he may be able to improve himself even more than his already ludicrous form. (if this was a Shirou prior to the war, he might be balanced enough to use, but any post-war Shirous are pretty much weapons of mass destruction). Not to mention that he got an armor as a boon, so that'd make him even harder to hurt.

Finally, since the afterlife options of people in Miyu-verse are sort of terrible, does this mean that we'll see more of them in this world besides Shirou and Sakura?

I liked this until you slammed him into the idiots group

Can you continue? Pretty please?

giggles evilly

Fingers crossed that KazxAqua is a thing...

Hey will there be another chapter coming up soon? I want to see the union of shirou and sakura. I also want to see shirou dealing more of the craziness that comes from that party hes in.

Cool. This story was pretty good, I wish you hadn't abandoned it. If you just need ideas got this then pm me. I can brainstorm with you any time. I also can correct your grammar and spelling of no one else is going to help with that. I have been compared to university professors that teach English when I try.

Um, no. They are attracted to each other like magnets, not his hands. Did you play the game or read the wiki?