If you ask Haoh about the "Magians" or the "Chaotics" I'm sure he would be happy to redirect you to a friend of mine. His Username on Fanfiction is bluvista. He doesn't have any works of his own, but he enjoys reading Yu-Gi-Oh docs, and commenting card ideas, archetypes, combos, and even entire decks just out of nowhere. You might want to ask Haoh about bluvista as well.

Oh, well. I really enjoyed reading this fic. Welp, at least this goes in to show I'm not really good at judging stories, since I just think 'Hey, this thing is good. Imma keep reading it.' Good luck with the rewrite, and if Z-ARC is helping you, then that means it's going to be awesome! I know the guy, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the rewritten first chaper of In A New World!

Keep It Up!

- SoulMatter

Been waiting on the new chapter for a long time, I can wait for a redo. Sad that this version is done though.

Cannot wait to read the rewrite. Good luck

I think your cards are being too op like which destroys all cards on the field make that monster a level 9 or 10 and that will be more acceptable.

"he only one who won was Yuya"...um what.

OH GOD WHY AM I IMVESTED OH DEER LORD ALL MIGHT I NEED YOUR HAID

Just wondering who the mc is in the story now ? Hardly ever see him ffs always other people dueling with long ass duels

Yayyy

Yayy

Vince is awesomeee

Vince is so cool :)

Hurray!

I discovered this story recently and I am LOVING IT!

I like how you decided to use GY Portals