Hey so...what you said about new ideas. What if Zuko goes with Aang and the others but does everything he can to stay in touch with Jin. No matter what you decide to do this is absolutely amazing! Keep up the great work!

I love it! Amazing chapter

Oh man. Zuko's in trouble. Jin, grab the nearest teapot and start swinging!

This chapter is pretty good. Nice and emotional.

As for your question at the beginning, I think Zuko should go with the gang but promise Jin that he'll be back. Maybe have the ending be them flying off with Jin having some farewells.

Awesome chapter keep it up :)

*squealing with joyous delight* Oh, please, please please make another chapter soon! This is too good of a story to stop now!

AMAZING! Please write more. You have such a beautiful story that very few have. Please write more!

When it's never continued this is sad plz one more chapter

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This is really good! I hope you continue it. Huge fan of Jin/Zuko and you write it well

Nice, like the stuff going on. With the development on Zuko's part affecting things. It works.

Only problem I have is the J cut's. Perhaps change it to list things like 'Tea Shop. 11:00' or something like that. Put it in center too just so that's easier to follow.

Overall nice chapter.

I wonder why u stopped. It's amazing

Very nice join I really hope to read more of this soon.

Suggesting Zuko talk to aang about joining. Once they make it out zuko agree to be aang firebending teacher. During practice aang almost get burns. Katara see it then get mad. She want to hurt zuko for all the pain he causing to there group. She get jin and show her Zuko a firebender. Jin can't believe it she love him and trusted him. Zuko wants to explain but she walk katara smile knowing he feeling her pain now. Zuko get mad he know katara did it to hurt him. Everyone one know what she did and are mad at her it. Zuko tell her beside his uncle she was only one who love him. It was because of her he began to think of katara as a friend. Katara feel bad about it and goes to talk jin. There Azula find them she about firebend at then intil zuko show up burning his arms. In pain he still training aang katara and jin can't believe it Zuko has not said one way word. Katara feel bad want to heal him Zuko refuse to he tell her katara want to feel him now she got her wish. Katara doesn't want this anymore and heal him Zuko tell jin he's never had a friend befriend who love him. He tell jin the true telling her he falling in love with her.

This is a great story I just love it! Jin my second favorite female characters.