I wish ravel did something to the dhampir I mean seriously? Then again she was raised to expect and except this.. Reading this just left me feeling frustrated and disappointed...

wow this ch so fvcking dark :(
Ty~!

Ty~!

This has to be the most under appreciated series in this section by a ridiculous margin. This story never gives you what you instinctively crave, it doesn’t serve as instant or slightly delayed gratification, it doesn’t pedal in easy solutions or instant fixes, nor does it shy away harsher conflicts that others would choose to forgo for convenience. This story doesn’t make me feel warm and fuzzy in the insider, no instead it gives me splitting headaches and exhaustion from frustration. I like to think of some stories as mental treats, but this story is medicine. Slow and bitter. But completely and questionably worth it.

Damn, your commitment to the gritty reality of the world and humanity is to be commended. Again, you don’t take the easy way out, not shying shying away from realism and the brutality shinobi world. Little details like what happened to Karin or A’s outlook exemplify this. Your dark but realistic and mature take can be a breathe of fresh air in section that generally focuses on combining OP MCs with a world filled with boobs. Not that I don’t appreciate chapters that are slices of life or comedic dialogue shared between characters. All the same, I don’t imagine it’s easy write this kind of stuff, at least it would not be for me, so I have to thank you for your work. I wonder how Narutos convictions will change as this story progresses, it’ll be nice to see him change, since it usually him converting others to his outlook.

I agree with your observation about Madara's commentary, man seeks peace but wars, that is mainly because man is a self-destructive being, so that although his intention is good his methods will not be, but anyway, I liked the first part, and the second one did not disappoint me at all, I hope something great also of the third part, see you in the next ... bye!

Damn these are great!

I like your take on the post ninja war. I rather this to be the “supposedly” ending to naruto

That tasty review to get to 600

story was gud until u had sasuke go full feetfag on chap 20. that's a disgusting fetish

Love your story's, can't wait for more

Yeah, this part of your Naruto and dxdverse is not my favorite. The story has a lot of potential, but you messed up trying to fill it up with Naruto and his fucking harem rather than concentrate on that plot. I mean irregular metronome was damn good ,being one of a kind with equal focus on Naruto and Sasuke. Sasuke in the story had his moment which made the story fresh and interesting, continuously stuffing Naruto in the fanfic makes the story like other thousands of shitty Naruto fics out there. Irregular metronome was much better than those other Naruto fics because it was different, but you went back with normal OP Naruto with less compelling story and more with naruto x women ,damn.

okay that was a good short story interesting how they decide to fix their old world

The dynamic between Ravel and Valerie is a bit dubious and I like it because of that. The entire 'don't mess with my dealings and I want mess with yours' deal they set up seems fine on the surface level until considering that they're both team mates and co-conspiritors in a coup d'état. The barely withheld hostility against each other will be a detriment in the short and long run of things. Building up credibility through Rating Games will be made all the harder when the synergy of Naruto's peerage is all off (non-existent) and thing could get to Dance of Dragon levels of in-fighting should you cover one or both of them becoming pregnant. This isn't even including the friction that Kunou and Kuroka would bring to the table. I'm sure Naruto will try to nip their issues in the bud, bud you've shown just how effective his is at that. Not very. Even if he stomped his foot and through his weigh as King around, he would likely only succeed in making them pissed with him. This simple bickering between his harem actually sets up a definitive way towards Naruto's downfall.
Rias' thinking that those in power would care about when they decide to go to school is more thana bit paranoid, which is to be expected. Everyone being flawlessly assured in themselves that they'll get away with this plan of their without a slip up would be unrealistic. Sasuke is always paranoid, but his is a relatively healthy paranoia. Its a nice touch to have someone with a type that is unhealthy.
Also to address the harem add-ons I'll say that you should do as you wish. I'm not for it, but I won't hold anything against this story because of it. Though if I could just take a a bit to explain my reasons as to why:
Rossweisse is a Valkyrie that was the guard of Odin. Unlike many other gods the Norse are well aware that they can/will die with Ragnarok being one of the most notable parts of their lore/mythology. Odin, Glad-of-War himself, tossing aside someone as powerful as Rossweise, let alone doing it in a way where she could be recruited by an faction seems out of character for him lore wise and with Valkyries being the loyalists they are its out of character for one of them to willingly deflect to another faction. I could see it should she be a spy for Odin, but then I would expect her to be killed by the group for her treachery rather than hooking up with Sasuke.
With Kuroka its much of the same. I just don't since Naruto as he is now willingly bringing someone with dubious allegiences into the group's inner circle. There's also the matter of Koneko. With the alterations/additions to her character being as they are I don't see her being as forgiving as she is in canon since Kuroka DID. abandon her, reasoning be damned.
I guess the gist of what I'm getting at is that ALOT of stuff that happens canon-wise is just too unbelievable in this realistic setting that you've taken things. From the church tossing aside their greatest holy swords to those of the Hero faction being allowed to do as they please with little fanfare in bringing them down. You could work in reasons as to why this or that happens in with your level of skill I expect that you would be capable of making those reasons actually reasonable, but they would definitely need to be explained to mantain a suspension of disbelief.

I guess this should be called the end of the beginning since from here on we'll be getting into canon proper.
Also remember your promise.
#Kunou for tentacle monster.

Zeo is such a tragic figure here. Everything is going to blow up in his face and he is helping it along.

On an unrelated note Yasaka from the anime crosses the line between over sexualized and physically revolting.

Is there any difference between the fanfic dot net version and the Archive of our own version?