Reviews for The Dragon and The Time Goddess
MarkedByKayn chapter 6 . 4/4
This story was all in all great. I enjoyed the dynamic, the specs of dry humor made me laugh quite a bit.

Now, I will voice that the grammar in this could of definetly been improved. It did get better as the story progressed, but it was still difficult to keep up with. A few more commas here and there wouldn't hurt, I think.

That said, still a great story. Interesting Idea all in all, too. I liked it quite a bit.
Gamma-X chapter 6 . 3/1/2019
Beautiful. Great fanfic! On to the next the one!
Not as good as Fire and Jade, but still pretty good. Loved it.
Good job!
Gamma-X chapter 5 . 3/1/2019
I forgot to say this, but I also loved the "HOW ARE WE NOT SUITABLE!?" part the girls screamed out. That was gold! 10/10!
Gamma-X chapter 4 . 3/1/2019
Love it. I want a Natsu x Brandish or even Lisanna story. Would be great thanks. Also, from this story, it would've been nice to get Brandish in on the fun too with Dimaria and Natsu. Would've made more sense considering her reactions and feelings for Natsu. If you'll be so kind as to ever make one of them, that would be great. Thank you. Now, on to chapter 5! :D
Gamma-X chapter 3 . 2/28/2019
ROFL! THIS CHAPTER IS HILARIOUS! XD
*Gasps* "YOUR MATES!?" Wendy shouted, utterly shocked at this sudden development.
Best part thus far! xD
Wtf Wendy? How do you know about this stuff!?
Gamma-X chapter 2 . 2/28/2019
So, Natsu is God-tier at the end of the series? Daaamn...
Loving it so far. Quite funny.
GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 7 . 1/6/2019
This was a really good story, well done. One of the few Natsu x Dimaria fics on this site.
SpringRolls chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
Another poorly written fiction. Nice try though
Meazm chapter 6 . 6/8/2018
Beautiful
IceDragonSlayerEmi791 chapter 6 . 6/6/2018
amazing like always, when i get some time to write ill post a chapter of forever and then try and re work Becuase i love you
MarshmallowPlant chapter 6 . 6/5/2018
nice
Guest chapter 5 . 6/4/2018
Very nice! Keep update :)
Barbatos rex chapter 5 . 6/3/2018
great chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 4/19/2018
Accurate Erza haha, good chapter
Barbatos rex chapter 4 . 4/19/2018
great story hopeyou continue it
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