Reviews for The Dragon and The Time Goddess |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was all in all great. I enjoyed the dynamic, the specs of dry humor made me laugh quite a bit. Now, I will voice that the grammar in this could of definetly been improved. It did get better as the story progressed, but it was still difficult to keep up with. A few more commas here and there wouldn't hurt, I think. That said, still a great story. Interesting Idea all in all, too. I liked it quite a bit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Great fanfic! On to the next the one! Not as good as Fire and Jade, but still pretty good. Loved it. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot to say this, but I also loved the "HOW ARE WE NOT SUITABLE!?" part the girls screamed out. That was gold! 10/10! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. I want a Natsu x Brandish or even Lisanna story. Would be great thanks. Also, from this story, it would've been nice to get Brandish in on the fun too with Dimaria and Natsu. Would've made more sense considering her reactions and feelings for Natsu. If you'll be so kind as to ever make one of them, that would be great. Thank you. Now, on to chapter 5! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL! THIS CHAPTER IS HILARIOUS! XD *Gasps* "YOUR MATES!?" Wendy shouted, utterly shocked at this sudden development. Best part thus far! xD Wtf Wendy? How do you know about this stuff!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, Natsu is God-tier at the end of the series? Daaamn... Loving it so far. Quite funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good story, well done. One of the few Natsu x Dimaria fics on this site. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another poorly written fiction. Nice try though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing like always, when i get some time to write ill post a chapter of forever and then try and re work Becuase i love you |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() Very nice! Keep update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() Accurate Erza haha, good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story hopeyou continue it |