Intéressant et ici tsunade est resté.

I thought the ten tails was a tree

I like the flow this story is takig, but I'm confused in a few things:
1st. What did Naruto do to his eyes that let absorb so much information, what were those eyes.
2nd. You stated that when Naruto emerged that he was shirtless, then had him walk around Konoha without anyone asking about it. Then suddenly when he wakes up from his talk wiyh Shinju and Jubi he has a shirt!?
3rd Why does it look like he is having memories from peoples past such as Anko and someone who resembles Kiba?

Great job keep it up.

Great job

Nice work

So will naruto get the Tenseigan and the Jōgan eventually or would naruto need to find a member of the Ōtsutsuki Clan or Kaguya Clan as their both related and absorb their chakra to unlock them.

Hmm, so wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work!

Love the story! Very original and I like Naruto’s cluelessness. Also glad you didn’t start him being straight up OP right off the bat. Can’t wait til the chapter when everyone finds out who and what he is and their reactions! Hopefully you can continue this story and finish it, cause I can’t wait to see him in real battle situations with stronger foes. If his abilities are what I’m thinking then the fight against Kaguya will be very interesting. Keep up the good work!

This story is great so far, I love the story and the planning and the little bits of plot. I can't wait to see how this story continues to unfold in the future. My only issue is that there are some mistakes in the words where a word is spelt to how it sounds and not actually spelt correctly, I think this could be fixed if you just double-checked your writing (sorry if that sounds too rude). Apart from that, I have no problems and only expectations of what this story will bring.

I have only one idea that can help improve the quality of the story, mainly because I really like the pairing of Naruto and Naruko, with few people using or seeing the potential in it.

This argument is not mine, but it is perfect for contextualizing my thoughts.

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I'm just going to be clear cut and straight to the point when I say this and I am not intending to offend anyone, so if you do get offended then I'm sorry. I don't hate harems, but I don't necessarily "like" them either. I find them highly unrealistic and their presence in stories tend to interfere with the actual story and plot itself.

There is a clear difference between the concept of "love" and the concept of "lust" and harems fall under the latter category.

First a brief introduction. If we're talking storywise, harems are just unnecessary since a writer will HAVE to build upon the multiple relationships the main character has which will for the most part ruin the immersion into the actual written plot since the main character will have to work to "assist" his pairing members in their struggles which only diverts away from the story and stagnates progression. If the writer doesn't do so, then I don't need to speak further considering everyone knows of the "classic" harem crossover genre that starts off with a overpowered main character that has women swooning at his feet with multiple females developing attractions to him within the first few minutes of meeting him. The story will continue for about ten chapters at max before its "SURPRISINGLY" discontinued and abandoned. The reason that most people just can't seem to grasp is because the writer spent too much time worrying about pairings that he didn't think the actual fucking plot through. Putting together a well-thought out pairing isn't as easy as it seems and putting together a harem where the main character is romantically involved with all his interests is just plain stupid. In summary, it's practically pointless to read a harem story on this site since for the majority of the time it'll only end up abandoned since the writer will have no idea where to go next.

Everyone likes their doses of realism, being either small or large, in their stories and I'm giving my honest, straight opinion here. You can "lust" for multiple women, but you can really only "love" one. In multi-pairing stories, there's going to be "head of the harem" girl that you prefer above all the rest and in reality the basic purpose of the extra women is to make up for what the main interest lacks. What makes a romance story fun to read is seeing the main character and his interest accept each other's faults, not using other extras and their specialties to cover those faults up.

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This argument is from the author "FirstStory".

I really wouldn't want to stop reading your story because of the Harem and because rarely does anyone write about Naruko vs Naruto.

I hope you are not offended.

Eh is naruko blonde or red

Great story so far, definitely a unique approach to the story, that I haven’t read before. Keep up the good work. Can’t wait for the next update

Hooray! You updated! Loved this chapter; although there is a lot of grammatical errors (but seeing as life has been hectic as you said along with your baby, it’s a valid reason).

In any case, keep this up! I hope to see more from you once you have the time to update again! See ya then!

Nice chapter glad to see naruto getting stronger and also the reactions from naruko and hinata from the "boyfriend" answer LOL. looking forward to see what will happen next and to see if you will do a time skip next chapter or later