Woowww... its soo beautiful! First ff which make me cry.. its soo good.. i love the ending! really good job author!

Three chapters and I'm sobbing buckets... that takes skill!

Would you like to know what made this so special?
It's the part where you let them meet in the afterlife.

I have yet to read one where all of them have passed away in due time and would reunite. I can imagine the scene so clearly as I read this chapter. Everything was so peaceful and heartwarming. And when they finally saw each other face to face and be able to embrace got me all tearing up. It was perfect. Because as you've written, it all started how they hoped it would be and now they were arguing like all those years ago. Hahaha! It was truly perfect...

I believe that the first 2 chapters could've been executed a bit more, but overall, it was wonderfully perfect.

I hope to read more from you. Thank you for sharing this with us!
-ChrysalisBluem

Ouch the feels! I cried through all of it!

My heart can't contain all the feels!

Owch!...My heart. It's okay, not like I needed that organ for anything.
May the muses favor you,
-Kip

this is so beautiful

Lovely story!
I really enjoyed "Fred's" comments in chapter two! Spot on!

nicely done.

I really liked your story !

I still don't get how her not telling Fred about the pregnancy is responsible for him dying. Remus and Tonks fought and died at the battle even though they had a newborn. Fred still would have gone because his whole family was there.

What the hell is wrong with Molly?! You'd think she'd just be glad that she'd have Fred's child to love. I know I would if it were me. But no, she immediately starts ripping into Hermione. And so what if Hermione eventually found someone else and they helped raise the child? And how could the baby not know about or miss Fred? Unless Molly refuses to acknowledge the kid she can tell them about Fred herself. Even then it's not like George isn't going to be around. Also, even if Fred had known he probably still would have fought.

Wow