Nice story

Nice story! I don’t hold my breath for much when we finally get the TV version, but I do hope it’s on the beach and as lovely as this one.

I loved this story. Also love the relationship between Grisha and Kensi. Kamran, Sam’s daughter, could be the flower girl. Ray was Deeks’ best friend but I believe he’s in witness protection.

Loved this story but yes Deeks has that old friend I don't remember his name but he was the famous basketball ball player in the show, remember Kensi was shocked when she found out how good friends they where.

french fan
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In the TV show FLASHPOINT, at the end of the show, two members are married and in fact, the worst case happened (I think the story was very intense)

Very good

Loved these two chapter you wrote! So well written and so in character...!
Can't wait to read more from you! (please write moreee!)

french fan
so perfect !
Why not sam's daughter as the flower girl ?

Nice chapter of the wedding - thanks for going with my suggestion though I doubt I was the only one. There was enough description to make it real without being overly burdened. I think the banter between Kensi and Callen was spot on and I think his speech was perfect. You didn't mention Roberta (Deeks' mom) or Julia (Kensi's mom) but it didn't detract from the overall loveliness of the story.
Deeks did have a close friend called Ray but he went into witness protection so probably couldn't have come to the wedding. Also Kensi and Nell did socialise outside of work - amongst other things they went to a monster truck meeting where they missed seeing Hetty (can't remember what episode that was in). However a great story nonetheless - well done.

What a wonderful story. With Owen gone (RIP Miguel), Callen is the obvious choice. I'm so pleased he said yes. Let's hope nothing prevents him from doing it. You'll have to do a story about the wedding before it gets on Tv - no pressure.

Awww very nice

Beautiful little story, thanks for writing it :)