plz update

This story seems very interesting, do keep it up.

well done keep on going

update?

Hope this fic doesnt die.

I'm glad you got straight to the point [just like the doom game XD] to were they meet and the way you wrote it makes sense and is believable.
Though now that they have meet, I doo hope the chapters will be longer.
I know you don't have many followers or reviews like some other fanfictions...yet. But even if just a few like your story, I would still write and continue it, even if it is only one person.
Suggestion: I doo hope you won't ruin Doomeslayer's character by making him speak like most Doom crossevers. If he has to communicate with Neptune, Nepgear, Usume, or any other characters., make it where he does it through action, gestures, and body language. That way I makes sense and keep Doomslayer in character.

P.S.: If you already planed that, then forget what I said

Your story's pretty good so far.

This story look really interesting. I only wish it was longer. Pleas tell me you going to continue this. Because I look forward to it.

Well if you want some advice, make the chapters longer than this one.

Longer pleas, also great fanfic love the idea so update soon

Oh yeah, I realize how short this chapter was I didn't have a lot of time on my hands. I will make it up to you guys by making a way longer chapter. Not like REALLY long but decent.