I think you are a truly gifted writer. You take sci-fi nonsense and turn it into a story that seems believable. I know everyone has their favorite character’s, but honestly, the back and forth between the main characters and Darcy and company isn’t necessary (I can only take Darcy in really small doses).

Really enjoyed this! No epilogue though?

Thanks for writing this lovely story.

I do wish there was a follow up story. It was a very quick wrapped up ending, but enjoyable. Great writing.

Please write more Loki stories.

My HEART

I used to be a Jane/Thor fan. You have officially made me a fan of Loki and Jane! It usually takes a very well written story to change my mind of a 'ship I adore and this was a very well written story! I absolutely loved it!

Awesome chapter! Love the ending you’ve chosen for this! Thank you for this story!

Wait... its iver? PLEASE TELL ME THERE IS AN EPILOGUE

awww, so cute! Loved this story every step of the way. Excellent job writing a story that draws your readers in, and endears your characters to them

Before reading your end note, I was like it's done!? Lol. Thabkse for the story. I love it and it has meaning with plot that makes sense. Will be waiting for your fluffy ending lol.

I was leaning on the edge of my chair, over the desk to my computer as I read this. Fantastic conclusion! I confess, I am holding out hope for an epilogue of some sort where we get to see where they go from here, maybe a peek of Thor and Loki working together in a way that we all have hoped they would some day.
I have to say thank you for keeping this at a "T" rating. I know that many would disagree with me, but I just don't think that "M" stuff adds to the story and instead, usually makes me want to skip the story all together. You do a wonderful job of weaving romance with real things people would say and do and it creates a really enjoyable story.
Thanks again for all your hard work!

Wow! Loki fighting Laufey was pretty epic, and I really appreciated the decision to not have him murder Laufey in cold blood. Also, the moment that Loki realized what Thor had done for him by sacrificing strategy to save Loki... i got a bit choked up. Well done! Your description of Jane using the Aether was amazing, by the way.

Great story thanks for sharing it.

The Kiss! Perfect, just perfect. Loki is confident in Jane's feelings and that gives him swagger, it's amazing. Ugh, I just love it.
Thor's reaction is spot on, initially angry, then cools into, "yeah, okay then, we'll work it out".
I can't wait to read what comes next!

If Loki had looked at something that I had built and shown respect while offering a casual suggestion, I think I might have gone a little weak in the knees too!
I loved the moment just after the almost-kiss when Loki realized Jane's attraction to him! His confidence is some kinda "wow".

I know that it's taking me for-ev-er to finish this, but I refuse to read each chapter until I have time to review as I go. I may be anxious to see how my peeps fair in the chaos, but it's worth it to be able to say "thank you" for sharing your hard work.
Thank you!

Man, I love a sly Loki! And I know that I've said it before, but your Steve Rogers is one of the best that I've read! Loki and Jane are obviously OTP, but I am still hoping you'll find time to write a Steve/Jane in the future!