Reviews for Catch and Kiss |
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Annaka45 chapter 15 . 3/23 Make up your mind stupid Harry! Omg i feel so sorry for Draco i cant even. Sniffling like hecc at 3: 30 am. I love thissss |
SkyeMoor chapter 14 . 6/3/2019 Ha. Go veritaserum the two idiots. (Remember folks: Snape's motto: Potions Fix Everything!) |
blank chapter 11 . 2/14/2019 please update? |
Aemartino chapter 11 . 1/9/2019 Ah...Slytherins and their intricate minds! Great job, excited to read more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2018 This is really nice and funny and i love how you interpreted The characters. Good luck continuing the story and your life! (In a non-onimous way) Thank you! And i hope you continue else I get hex-happy! :) |
DeathsHeadMoth chapter 10 . 7/26/2018 And the plot thickens... D I'm intrigued by this development. Not only is there Something Going On, but Mill knows about it. How does she know? What is she doing about it? So many questions, and only you have the answers. Sorry that I'm a bit late, I've been out of town. Hope you're well! |
SkyeMoor chapter 10 . 7/20/2018 George! You're dating a slytherin. Figure it out is their motto. Lovin' the fact that Gin notices that Malfoy's not drinking, but that everyone misses the fact that Harry's not. Also lovin' the paranoia that shows. |
Tigglette chapter 9 . 6/24/2018 love this extension to the story! thank you for sharing! |
DeathsHeadMoth chapter 9 . 5/30/2018 I think your use of flashback thus far in the story is very interesting. In a way, you are telling the story on a timeframe greater than the current setting would suggest. By doing this, we are getting this rising sense of George becoming more aware of the Harry/Draco dynamic and how it has developed from schoolboy rivals (& stalking on Malfoy's part) to what it currently is. I am very intrigued as to how you will continue to develop this D. My only criticism is that the transition from present action to flashback is very abrupt. I think some sort of specific indicator that we are viewing a flashback would enhance the storytelling greatly. Still loving the story and I hope you are well. P.S. - I still find myself giggling suddenly when I remember Creevey's absolute Creepiness. Thank you again for this gem of humor. |
SkyeMoor chapter 9 . 5/21/2018 So, um... was Mill being serious when she said she was trying to look attractive? |
Sabby128 chapter 1 . 5/19/2018 I've decided I'm just going to start reviewing every chapter. Your stories have a dramatically low review count for how fucking amazing this and Game Set Match are. Please continue to update and come up with complex plots. Their might be a couple of holes , but honestly the originality of your writing is extremely refreshing and cute. |
DeathsHeadMoth chapter 8 . 4/22/2018 I saw you had updated, and I just had to re-read everything, again. Creevey in this chapter is HILARIOUS. The fact that he's tried to proposition a professor (a backstory I don't know if I'm more terrified or amused by), his doctor, and an auror that arrested him and they've all tricked him into leaving them alone is Comedy Gold! You do such wonderful work on this story, and I hope you're well. |
moonlillies chapter 8 . 4/17/2018 my goodness, I love how crazy this is. thank you! |
SkyeMoor chapter 7 . 4/17/2018 Lol! catnip icecream. Didn't see that coming at ALL! |
SkyeMoor chapter 3 . 4/17/2018 Lol. When even Callum's figured it out! |