Reviews for Too Far
PadrePedro chapter 1 . 9/5
A horrible story; you very well accomplish what you intended with it! Thanks for posting!
Etta.Ju chapter 2 . 7/21/2019
Heartbreaking story and great writing!
P.S. I would ask for sequel to the sequel nobody asked for! Some solution to these sad events...
Blackjack Emrys chapter 2 . 7/17/2019
I love this story so much even though it breaks my heart. Your writing style really suits the feel of the story and you really do bring together some really good points that all of us Merlin lovers wonder about, why did he stay when they all treated him so terribly?
gaylelbf chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
So sad.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/6/2019
I was upset too... Season 5 was horrible how all the knights were rarely ever there for Merlin. Especially Gwaine who claimed Merlin was his best friend!
Phoebe594 chapter 2 . 7/6/2019
I love this story! Would love to see more chapters too! I really like the style and would love to see it go further.
mersan123 chapter 2 . 7/6/2019
This was very moving. I do wish you would take it further. Sometimes (many times) I wonder why Merlin did stay. He was overlooked and treated so badly by his "friends". I realise he needed to work from the shadows, but that does not excuse the behaviour of those around him. I quite enjoy the thought of him just upping and leaving. Perhaps finding the Druids, learning his potential and leading his people in peace. Yeah, sod you Arthur.
Anyway, enjoyed the second chapter. Quite depressing.
Darcie chapter 2 . 7/6/2019
This was absolutely fantastic. I lived your characterisation and the your style of writing is so unique and heartbreaking. I would love to read more
Dossypet chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
I'd love to see a second part of this where Merlin snaps. but this is also Amazing on it's own! good writing!
RomanticLover1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2018
I really think you should expand on this, maybe through increasing the amount of narration, thoughts and dialogue. It would also be awesome to have a conclusion where Merlin leaves or something.
I often found it quite annoying in the show how often Merlin was mistreated, especially in the final series.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2017
I can't think of a good word to describe this. None of them do it justice. I really enjoyed it and it's really well written. Thankyou.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Unfortunately I disagree. Merlin was left behind too many times. Nicely written.
Faith chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Amazing! I'm definitely following you