Great the momma bear but can't help remembering the ou,of tailor offing Alexandria. I know its a story but there's this sadness about all off it.

Great story. Great idea. Great writing style. That's all I can say.

Enjoying it so far! Waiting to see how the Herbert's fit into the picture. Also looking forward to how costa and Alexandria pretend to be in the same place at the same time rather than just over the phone.

I thought this story died.

One of the more fascinating AUs out there. I hope you update more.

Poor Taylor

Glad to see a new update, keep up the good work.

awesome chapter

great pov

poor taylor

interesting chapter

love their interaction

excellent beginning

1. I’m liking the story, i’ve Been reading it over on ao3 before I realized you’re cross-posting it here.
2. I get that taylor’s Being groomed as rebecca’s Heir, but does she seriously have clearance for personal files? I wanna hear more about that. Doe she actually hold rank? Or is it more of “mom bring home files and I look at em” kinda thing.
2a. If she does hold rank, I wanna see more about that. (Check out internship and/or deputy over on space battles if you haven’t)
3. Keep up the good work.

I can't wait for more of this, so please keep this story going!

This is really good, short of a bit of chronological organization (chapter 5 should precede chapter 3, when Hero first appeared not as a passing mention). I do like your writing style; it's that mixture of concision and punctuality that really pushes the mood forward.

Idk why you're not getting more readership. Maybe try a more drawing hook?