This was a really nice story. Thank you. I don't usually like Katara/Aang, but you rolled with it and made that final cannon scene beautiful, playful, and hopeful.

A nice start to the four part fic! The core relationship between Zuko and Aang is present (I actually thought for a quick moment at the very beginning that there was some one-sided romantic pining almost on Zuko's side!)
Zuko's POV comes across strong, and his introspection throughout brings some nice depth to the fic. Sometimes their dialogue seems a little stilted, but it isn't really an issue especially considering how Aang sometimes does talk in that heavy fashion. Thanks for writing and sharing!

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
I love this and the ending was so sweet
it's so well written I can't

This was really lovely! I shall have to check out the others.

Very nice!

The big brother vibe from Zuko is so sweet here! The water motif is lovely, too. Seriously loving this piece. :)