Awesome!

When I first saw “Future Tense” the new neighbors (Yates Family) their smile just creeped me out for some reason. It’s the look that made me think that they’re not innocent. Like a thief giving the people a sinister smile. I enjoyed this story

I feel like Lincoln and Clyde having a friendship-jeopardizing falling out over Lincoln finally getting fed up with Clyde's obsession with Lori could be an interesting story in and of itself.

Well, finally put off procrastinating and doing other things to ignore giving one of your best fanfics to date.

I have to say, this was everything a deconstruction story of a trope should be and more. How you called out ridiculous points in the trope, like how being too nice is bad thing, why everyone has a right to get mad at some point, why each of Lincoln's sisters have gotten angry over something; not just a select five and above all else...

Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lola and Lisa are each unique and special individuals, that just labeling them by one word... is wrong. The same can be said, not only for each of the Louds but, anybody in general. No one's perfect, but our flaws make us who we are, complete perfection (even though that's impossible) makes us something we're not.

The ending were Lincoln revealed the Nicer/Meaner note was written for a different purpose than his other sisters thought, was well-written from start to finish. Made even better by how Lincoln appologized for it hurting them, said he's the luckiest boy in the world to have each of his siblings and threw out the Nicer/Meaner sister note as garbage (since the trope actually IS).

If only there was a scene that pointed out how flawed the 'Nicer' sisters really are, then again that would've been... too nice (pun not intended XD).

You are too clever a writer, for your own good sometimes. ;)

Thanks for writing a deconstruction of the 2nd (first being the "St. Lincoln" trope) worst trope in this fandom.

Keep up the great writing! :-D

marvelous

Completely loved this story so much!

Man, I've been procrastinating wring this review for some reason. Oh well, better late than never!

Plot (3/3): Now, Lincoln's sisters realizing how piss poor they've treated him sometimes and coming together to make it up to him is nothing new, but I'll admit, seeing them go this far was fun.

Storytelling (3/3): There's a saying "if it ain't broke don't fix it" and I'll admit, despite how typical this story is told, it works pretty well. Nice job.

Grammar (3/3): Readable, check! Great work here!

Impact (1/1): Every now and then, it's nice to have a break from the darkness. Good job.

Great work here mate, I rate 10/10!

My favorite Loud House fics are the ones you can see as an actual episode. On that alone, you've nailed it perfectly. And you should feel proud for that.

Is there something effecting them mentally? I have to ask that, because if there's not... They might be insane... Like naturally.

:) great story man

Can you do a story of Lisa as the main character? That would be pretty awesome!

Also, I liked this story.. Comes to show, NONE of the sisters are mean or nice.. They're just who they are.

For a story that is not supposed to be a deconstruction of the Nice Sister/Mean Sisters cliche, it is certainly the best deconstruction of the Nice Sister/Mean Sisters cliche that I have ever read. Good to see that this misunderstanding has been cleared up and that Lincoln loves all his sisters equally. Nicely Done (pun definately intended).

That was amazing. Great job.

By the way, if this was the last chapter, you forgot putting the state of the story in "complete"

This was a great story. It was funny throughout most of the chapters, and heartfelt at the end. There were even a few scenes that felt like they could be in the actual show. Looking forward to whatever you do next.

Stiiill no l is for loss update, i see.

also, ouch, the sweet aesop hammer hit hard.

keep up the good work. :)