OMG this was so good! when Keith said that he can't loose Lance and started crying that's when I broke. it was so sad, but written very well. props to you author

IM SO SAD RIGHT NOW! I feel for Keith and Lance! I love them both so much! This was such a good story!

This was really good, poor Lance and poor Keith! :'( I'm glad that he'll be okay though. And I love how both of their lions roared when Lance's heart stoped! That was amazing and I didn't expect it :'D I know it says that this is complete but I feel that this really needs a second chapter, just to see how they are all okay and to see Keith and Lance talk after this.

This was soooooooooo good! Everyone was in-character, the story was great, the prose was well-written, the way you handled the theory, plus whump galore! (And thank you for writing this story where it could be interpreted either way. I love platonic Keith-and-Lance stories, and that is just SO rare nowadays, so you have no IDEA how much I appreciate this! Thank you so much!)

Are you going to do a follow-up story? I'd love to see how Shiro mentally deals with what not-Shiro did. It'd be cool if you had that inner conflict (him trying to get over that, while the team is trying to trust him again), while him and some of the other Paladins were on a mission-gone-wrong or something.

If you do write a sequel, please PM me! As long it stays with the ability to be platonic, like this story, I'd LOVE to read it! Thank you again for writing this!

So. Who else is crying

Wow, well done!

Gosh dangit this is really good! Wouldn't mind seeing a continuation if the muse moves you.

I gotta love my sweet hurting boys. This was really well done. Kudos to you!