Reviews for Short Story - Second Chances
Chaos Incatasi Fox chapter 3 . 1/5
If you would be willing and interested, I'd be intrested in possibly continuing this story, or making another story in tribute to this because it is wonderfully written.
Chaos Incatasi Fox chapter 3 . 1/5
Akaiyuki-Tenshi-San, you have an amazing was with words and the ability to give a new life to an already amazing story. It has giving me many ideas for stories of my own. I love the way you did this and hope I can make my own stories just as good.
Solvent Harp37 chapter 3 . 6/23/2018
This is a really enjoyable story! Normally time travel fics are hit-and-miss for me because of the bad writing or overwhelming OOCness but you avoided both of these and created a great piece. I wish there was more to read right now and I will happily await any updates in the future. If the fic is over, well, it was still a good read so thanks for writing it! :)
YaoiFanaticFreak chapter 3 . 6/14/2018
Oh honey, I wish you would continue this story of yours. I have read lots of Time Travel fics but yours is one of the stories which I /can read/.
Bunnyprincess90 chapter 3 . 5/29/2018
This story is awesome. It'll be great if you ever thought of writing the continuation of it. I'll definitely read that!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/10/2018
Damn, more please?
Shadow.nao chapter 3 . 5/7/2018
Awesome fic! Please update!
Chamalho chapter 3 . 4/26/2018
Hello really Nice work i like how you taking the story from the start While staying correct no "luffy 7years old kickin New world pirates's ass and travelling with geppou between islands" ridiculous.. You did it Nicely preparing the adventure and i cant Wait to see tjr interactions with the Whitebeards pirates and the rest!Nice job i hope you ll update soon
X9-Killbot chapter 3 . 4/25/2018
NOOOOO! Why did you stop there, it started to become really good.
AltairSnow chapter 3 . 4/21/2018
Continue? Please!
Insertcliquehere chapter 3 . 4/4/2018
this was a true piece of art! I wish I could favorite this multiple times. I enjoyed reading.
XIII-hades chapter 3 . 3/27/2018
follow
SakuraS41 chapter 3 . 10/15/2017
This is really nice! Would be nice if you decided to continue with it.
Shannon Rei D. Sumner chapter 3 . 9/25/2017
This is awesome. I don't usually review but as I wrote, this is adorably amazingly awesome. Love the writing, love the flow of the story. Kudos to you. Looking forward to the next chapters (one shots?).
Stolyint chapter 3 . 9/25/2017
This is really good. I don't care if you make this extremely long and detailed or short and quick. But can you please continue it. Your way of writing is really good and I would like to know how you would continue it.
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