Reviews for Phoenix
Andrea Nike chapter 7 . 6/8/2018
please please please continue! it's great and really intense
Guest chapter 7 . 2/5/2018
Update please!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/17/2017
Wow. There was so much packed into that. It was short but just sucks you right into the emotions of the characters. You captured the terror and numbness of that day and then added the background of an abusive marriage. Of course Robin recognizes it and wants to save Regina. I'm in awe of your writing as usual. Just wow.
soligblomma chapter 7 . 9/18/2017
This was an intense read, wow.
Apples26 chapter 7 . 9/17/2017
Great chapter
sequoiabuttrfly chapter 7 . 9/16/2017
OMG there has to be more to this story. There just has to be. I can visually see every moment you described and yet only a few times did you describe the towers in the seven chapters posted. It was as though I was taken back to that day, watching as our world was falling apart at the seams. I agree with Sean. Regina needs to walk away and start a new life somewhere else. She needs to take advantage of this tragic event and allow it to be her death as well. Leo isn't going to care that she safely escaped that tower. He's going to be pissed that she never called, period. For that, there is no telling what he will do. Besides, why does she need to go back. She can let him believe she died because he murdered her spirit the moment he laid a violent hand on her. Abuse can lead to death and there's no telling of the future Regina would have, much less knowing if he would eventually kill her in the process of one of his brutal moments with her. Regina needs to leave and she needs to allow Robin the chance he deserves because not only did he save her life, he loves her and only her.

I really hope you write more to this story.
LongLostLover chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
This. Is. Awesome. I really am shook. So many feels, so many raw emotions in not so many words. The way this little piece made me feel was extraordinary, pure mixture of various emotions. I don't even know if I'm ready for it yet. But I WANT it!
XXXXXXXXXXXXZZZXZZZXZZ chapter 7 . 9/15/2017
Good god. Holy... No words to describe this except: Keep going! Wow.
Dana chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
Holy fucking shit
I have no words
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
Omfg I loved this! Omgf yes! Omfg please write more more now now now now
Ablue9987 chapter 7 . 9/12/2017
Wow! Excellent! Beautifully written. I could feel the emotions. I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation of this fabulous story.
phoenixshine chapter 7 . 9/12/2017
I'm ruined Allison... RUINED! You knew this would happen, uuuuuuugh now I DO WANT TO ASK FOR MORE BUT I KNOW I SHOULDN'T CAUSE BREAKING IN COMES FIRST AND THEN THERE'S VEGAS AND THEN THERE'S ATWFL BUT UUUUUUUUUUUUGH YOU KILLED MEEEEEEEEE! this was bloody BRILLIANT, so intense, so many feelings in so few words, so much emotion, such a big story, so many questions left unanswered, like who else was in their office, did they make it out alive, do they have other friends, WHO are their friends, were Robin and Regina close before this, WHAT IS GOING OOOOOOOOOOOOON?

yeah, I'm trash, thanks girl!
retrinazambrano chapter 7 . 9/12/2017
Wow. I know that, when you take this off hiatus (and how I hope you continue with this one), it's going to be one of those fics I drop everything for. It's a difficult subject to touch on, but I'm very interested on where this goes.
AsYouAre chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
Allison! As you know I'm quite fond of everything you write, but I must say I'm a super sucker for your thriller heavy pieces. This was intense and wrought with emotion which is significant given how small the word count is. I hope we'll get to see more with this verse and thanks for sharing it!
IvyMil chapter 7 . 9/11/2017
This is art.
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