Great work, just like the first story. Now, onto part 3...

Very good. I love the in depth plot and characterization.

Fantastic end to a fantastic story. I have been reading both of the stories from the start, and I love how you written the story of Ashoka and her moving on from the death of Vader. I can’t wait for the next story, and how Ashoka and the ghost crew's journey goes from here.

I have to say, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. I usually just like sabezra stuff, but this story does not disappoint. It's thrilling, exciting and perfectly well-written. I love the way you handled Grand Admiral Thrawn, much better than they do in the series I assure you. Killing Vader in the first part, I gotta say I was really upset with it, but now I see the possibilities that can bring in future plots. Now I have one speculation and two questions : I think you are going to handle Maul just like in the actual series, although I doubt what will become of his fate once he meets Kenobi to mend their "old wound". Now the questions : Where is the Eighth Brother? Did he become a bounty hunter or is he trying to follow his own agenda, like Maul? Perhaps some Knights of Ren references? I don't know, maybe I'm going nuts, it's all in your head after all. And second : Are you thinking on bringing Rukh (I have no idea how to spell his name) into the stories to come? I mean, as Thrawn's personal assassin, he could serve as an alternative to the Inquisitourious, and maybe lead the ground attack on the Attolon Base. Just some concepts you might consider using. Well, most of all I'd like to congratulate you for the amazing stories you are publishing, they are indeed making me wish to restart writing. Maybe in time I'll do something like this, but I have to finish my three-part story as well before that can happen. Keep writing the great stories!
Peace Out, wabba lubba dub-dub!
LukeDude

I loved this story so much, you have no idea. Plotting and character development were first rate and you kept everyone in character. I can't wait for story number 3!

Please write more of this great story. More chapter.

Great chapter, since sidious is hunting Ashoka, is maul going to appear and team up with Ashoka once more, or is he dead, killed by obi-wan? Please update soon.

So they got away, did they? Oh well, I hope you don't intend to kill of Thrawn. He's too good to be killed off. I hope Thrawn booby trapped the plans.

Well they still have to get out of the factory and into hyperspace. I wonder If Thrawn has left anymore traps for them in case this happened? Togruta's must have thick skulls. Update soon please!

Ahsoka is op, I mean kicking Thrawn's butt without the force or a weapon is epic. Great chapter, please update soon.

Ooooh Ahsoka, your in for it now! She broke Thrawn's nose- that was a nice touch having her take the Almighty Chiss down a peg. Glad she was able to escape, and Sidious egging her on like... makes me wonder about how much he appreciates the talents of the alien tactician. *shoves injured Thrawn into the TARDIS with Clara Oswald*

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! You brought in the ysalamiri- clever you! I was wondering how was Thrawn was going to handle Ahsoka and for a minute I thought Kallus had thrown Thrawn off of his game. You did not disappoint.

If you want help writing romance, feel free to read any of my SWR stories. Loved the cliffhanger ending- LOOK OUT AHSOKA!

You can't see, but I clapped my hands when I finished this chapter. What will happen next? Update soon please!

Is sidious going to apear in more of the other chapters? Great chapter, can't wait for more.